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Post by Spitzfamine on Apr 6, 2014 23:03:01 GMT -6
Let's hop right into it, yeah?
In The World of Terial, there are two active continents. On those continents, a massive story is taking place. Caro Tekinen is escorting the Princess of Magic, while Mina Keresky is fending off poison in the same area. On the same continent, Ariana Terensta and Sarisa Reina Teriko have ran away to start an adventure, while Tarra Rechara is currently knocked out after having her airship crash. Vergel Merzarick is going off to finish the job he's been assigned to. Not far from him, Mikayel Terecho is cast out at sea in a lifeboat after witnessing a ship being plunged in fire. On the other continent, Soujoro Muerchardo is resting to deliver a mission to the Lord of Gerido, while Sierra Delnos is currently unconscious after chasing after something that stole her sister. Far south of them, Morigan Gerino is passed out in a town, with Rose Flowina and Kale, a mysterious stranger, looking after her.
They all have two things in common: Creatures called Abominations are looking for them, and they've all received the same dream: A message to go to Verria Island. Accompanying most of them are various members of the Colourna Family.
Since I last left this thing to die brutally...
Vergel, Mikayel, Jake, Yellonda, and Bludera have all found a burnt down forest, where they found the Aegis Crux. Now they're trying to get out. But which way do they go? The last choice I offered is going to be a repeat, just to get back into the swing of things!
"So, here's the big question: What does your Annadar say now, Jake?"
"Err... It says north."
"IT SAID SOUTH NOT LONG AGO!" Yellonda says, booming her voice for the first time.
Jake is visibly stunned. Recovering in a few seconds, he shakes his head. "Come on, trust me! My Annadar is never off!"
Should you trust him, or perhaps figure out something on your own?
A. Jake's Annadar is good so far!
B. He doesn't know where he's leading us, let me take a look and find out where we need to go next!
Remember, the POV character for this day is Vergel Merzarick.
Other notes: The stats and skills and levels aren't important, don't worry about them too much; this has much fewer mechanics. It's just a good story to be determined by you all.
And while I have the ears, it's good to be here. Thank Neo for inviting me. Assuming you all care at all about my little godlings.
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Post by Neo on Apr 6, 2014 23:20:20 GMT -6
Well, that was quick! Let's see... I'll vote A. We can follow the Annadar for a bit longer... After all, maybe Jake's Annadar just seems broken. Everyone thought Captain Jack Sparrow's compass was broken too, and look how that turned out. Joke's on them, har har.
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Post by Spitzfamine on Feb 17, 2015 13:37:14 GMT -6
So, information!
Chapters: 45/50: 17 Split Chapters, 8 together chapters, 10 Arc chapters, 10 concluding chapters, and possibly 5 gaiden chapters. Maybe more?
The Colournas have been changed to important characters instead of just there. There have been a few class changes to encourage a bit more diversity. Now the only two copies are Ariana and Greelo, both Mages.
No hidden chapter for characters, just those possible gaidens.
There's another character added to the line-up. There are a grand total of Thirty playable units.
The main lord, aka You, will be determined at the Isle.
Lastly, and perhaps most importantly to this board, shipping will actually matter in this story!
So, let us begin the story!
/Curtain Rise!\
There are two continents in the world of Terial; Therdon, and Belendra. There is also an island, Verria. Or at least, they are the only two left. In the year 988, A great flood came. Prophets warned them, but only two people paid attention; A sage named Kumlia, and a Queen named Lerina. After a lengthy campaign, they managed to save their home continents. The heavens shook and rumbled and let loose tears from the gods. The world-except for the other two continents- was consumed by a great flood for 25 years. The other lands were lost to the holy water. The people of Therdon thought it would recede, but five years magical studies proved that no, it would never.
It is now the year 1008. Inner conflict is brewing as prophets are declaring earth being torned asunder, rain being corrupted, and warmth dying out. You are asleep, when suddenly, you are visited in your dreams by a man in a brown robe.
"I have selected you and others. Come to Verlon Castle, on the Island of Verria, and begin your destiny."
You awake with a start and look in the mirror, noting the sweat.
Who... are you?
A. I'm Caro Tekinen, a male Myrmidon from the country of Verlon, on the continent of Therdon.
B. I'm Ariana Larino, a female Mage from the country of Ardian, on the continent of Therdon.
C. I'm Soujoro Muerchardo, a male Cavalier from the country of Berniol, on the continent of Belendra.
D. I'm Sierra Delnos, a female Wyvern Knight from the country of Geridol, on the continent of Belendra.
E. I'm Mikayel Terecho, a male Pirate on the sea.
F. I'm Tarra Rechara, a female Dancer currently being flown to Ardia, located on the continent of Therdon.
G. I'm Mina Keresky, a Rider hidden away in a village.
H. I'm Vergel Merzarick, a Mercenary currently on a ship.
I. I'm Kaze Rainex, a Soldier in the country of Anadal, located on the continent of Belendra.
J. I... don't know who I am! And I'm in a field with a portable mirror located in the middle of nowhere!
Joke option 1: I'm a Jupriuotrideri, a Dark Queen manakete warrior!
Joke option 2: I'm soooo done with this.
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Post by Neo on Feb 17, 2015 14:02:12 GMT -6
Wait... Is JK1 actually viable?! If so, I totally vote JK1.
If not, and assuming the characters are all the same, I vote J. I like her.
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Post by Spitzfamine on Feb 17, 2015 14:05:01 GMT -6
J leads to the Avatar creation. So while it COULD be Morigan, depending on the votes it could be someone entirely different!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2015 18:13:54 GMT -6
Jk2 sounds very tempting. But alas I will vote F should be interesting to see what a female dancer would be like
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Post by SummerCrow on Feb 17, 2015 18:35:53 GMT -6
I don't think we've had a flying MC yet (not counting Trail), so I vote D.
Though I also don't think there's been a dancer, so if you're tryna move the story along, you can pretend that's an F up there.
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Post by Spitzfamine on Feb 17, 2015 18:39:52 GMT -6
Before I lock, I will ppint out that you will have 17 chapters to get to know them, then on the 18th chapter, I will ask who you want to be MC.
Until then, there's no rush. You'll eventually view all of their chapters, so try not to worry about that angle either.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 18, 2015 6:42:41 GMT -6
F.
I'm sorry, but there's too many male MC in CYOA, and it gets old fast. Plus, I want to see a Lord that isn't combat based.
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Post by Spitzfamine on Feb 18, 2015 14:25:13 GMT -6
So it's settled! Tarra is the first person for the first day.
Tarra lurches up and gasps. Unfortunately, due to airships being a brand new thing, they're very shaky... and that causes her to fall flat on her face.
"Ow." She gets up and wobbles her way over to a mirror. Smiling, she glides her way out of the room. Nice and easy... until she hits the other door.
"Ow."
"Sorry Tarra! You know these Cabins are too small." says a male mage with green hair, extending his hand. Tarra gratefully accepts it. "You're okay, right?"
"I've had my knee almost cut off, I've had worse." Tarra says with a smile, dusting off her pants.
"Ouch. Well, let's go and get up on deck. You're needed for a show, anyways."
"Thanks for letting me know, Greelo." Tarra gracefully walks up to the deck.
"I always enjoy this view." Tarra says on deck. "I wonder if it's what a manakete always sees."
"HEY! SLAVE GIRL! DANCE FOR ME!" The captain of the airship says, throwing a bottle at Tarra. She was quite used to this treatment by now.
"You don't own me. Even the fatty in Ardian doesn't own me. It's just my services." She says unemotionally.
"YOU'LL DO AS YER TOLD! COULD THROW YA OFF THE SHIP!"
"And miss out on the deliverer's fee? You're too smart for that." Tarra said, turning her back to the man.
"DANCE, DAMN YOU! DANCE!" The male says as he continues throwing bottles at her.
How should Tarra handle this?
A. Keep ignoring him.
B. Dance for him.
C. Kill him.
D. Pretend to dance, THEN kill him.
VJK. Give the Lovely Gheb a lapdance.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 18, 2015 14:28:45 GMT -6
VJK!!!!
Kekekekeekekekekekeekekeek!
Um, let's go A.
This slime ball had already pissed me off by his objectification of our MC. If he tries something, we're killing him.
*Smiles sadistically*
With... A RUSTED SPOON*
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Post by Deleted on Feb 18, 2015 22:52:27 GMT -6
Can we do a combination of VJK and C.
We give the captain of ships that fly in the air a dance of laps. Yet, at the end he feels our fury in the form of a rusted spoon through the jugular. While he is gasping for our forgiveness. We tell him we have forgiveness like you have manners and tolerance which is too say none. We were prepared to offer him chlortles but then he had to go and incur our fury. Then in his moments of a dying nature we give him chlortles.
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Post by Neo on Feb 18, 2015 23:31:08 GMT -6
I'm pretty sure we did D last time. So D.
Though the VJK is tempting...
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Post by Spitzfamine on Feb 19, 2015 11:39:40 GMT -6
To reconcile, The killer lapdance wins!
Tarra walks over to the fugly captain.
"You want me to dance? I'll dance for you." She says as the ugly man smiles.
"Now that's more like it! Invigorate me, give me some oomph!" The captain says, jumping up and down causing the ship to shake a little.
Tarra begins her dance by moving her right arm over her face, slowly walking toward the ugly one, doing a few belly rolls.
"Yes... This is nice! This is what I want!"
"Anything to help you out." She says as she twirls on one foot, before doing some very suggestive dance moves. The captain was in his own little world. Tarra took this time to spin around and around him, before finally stabbing him in the throat with a dagger.
"A last dance, just for you!" She says, pulling out the dagger and watching him fall. A massive effort, she drags the body over and throws it over board, but not before looting a key ring and a vulenary from him. "What a graceful tumble." She flips her hair and smiles.
"Now who'll pilot the boat?" Greelo says with a frown. "'Accidents' happen all the time with this newfangled airship, but now we don't have a pilot!"
"This thing can't fly itself?"
"Hell no!"
"THEN WHO'S PILOTING IT NOW?!" Tarra screams as she ducks and braces for impact.
"I am." Says a female voice, loud and clear. "And now that I know who you are... ABOMINATIONS!"
Not that many pop up. A few Greens and Reds.
"Wh-what are these things?!"
"Your demise." The voice says simply. "Now, I must focus on this contraption, if you don't mind."
+++FIGHT!+++
5 Abominations- 3 Red(Tanks) and 2 Green.(Normal.) 1 ???.
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Tarra, Greelo,
How should they handle this?
A. Have Greelo do most of the work, Tarra dancing and supporting him.
B. Have Tarra do most of the work, Greelo supporting her.
C. Focus on the voice from the captain's seat!
D. Have Greelo kill the Abominations while Tarra goes for the Voice!
E. Custom Strategy
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Post by Deleted on Feb 19, 2015 13:09:46 GMT -6
A.
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Post by SummerCrow on Feb 19, 2015 19:14:20 GMT -6
D's been going well enough so far.
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Post by Neo on Feb 19, 2015 19:41:37 GMT -6
D. Cause I'm pretty sure that's what we did last time. Again. WE MUST NOT TAMPER WITH TIME!!!! WE MUST NOT CHANGE THE PAST!!! As far as I am concerned, the present involves adorable Morrigan, and this is the past.  |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 19, 2015 22:18:21 GMT -6
I vote A
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Post by Deleted on Feb 19, 2015 22:47:02 GMT -6
It seems we're at a tie. I'm stuck between face palming at the D votes and actual strategy.
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Post by SwordMasterEX on Feb 19, 2015 23:01:56 GMT -6
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