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Post by Deleted on Jul 24, 2014 9:38:00 GMT -6
Right... So EB is currently pushed back to Behind Broken Path, and a new CYOA I may, or may not post today. This is a general account of hidden reports that may be found in the new CYOA. Item lore, lore, characters, and town and cities may be occasionally updated into the book. At the end, some hidden thing may be added.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2014 7:45:29 GMT -6
Characters~ -------------
Name: Kuro Gender: Male Age:??? Bio: Seemingly the only demon that remains on the human plane. How he got there and why remains to be seen. He has taken up becoming a mercenary. Silver hair and red eyes. Cloak and all dark colored clothing. Weapons: Twin swords, Tomes.
Name: Avera Gender: Female Age:28 Bio: Not much is known about this woman, except for the fact she appeared around roughly 5 years ago with Silvester, her father. Weapons: Tomes
Name: Torah Gender: Male Age:??? Bio: Once a knight of a kingdom he'd rather not remember. Due to extreme circumstances, he lost two of the greatest things that were dear to him. Weapons: Swords, Great Swords.
Name: Silvester Gender:Male Age:??? Bio:The current advisor to the sickly Susannian king, Riord. Weapons:???
Name: Arashi Gender:Male Age:16 Bio: The son of Duke Terra, a man who currently serves as a holy knight. Arashi didn't have a chance to meet his mother, and never knew who she was. Growing up on the ideals of his father, this young noble has a distaste of war. He is relentless in negotiating with every for he may encounter. An idealist, but not too naive. Dark red hair and blue eyes. All black light armor. Weapon: Sword
Name: Azami Novel Gender: Male Age:17 Bio: The adoptive daughter of Jeanne. Unlike Arashi, her past is a complete mystery. She grew up without knowing either of her parents, and developed a rough attitude all around. Calm off the battlefield, and hotblooded on it. She is a loyal friend to Arashi none the less. Blue hair and green eyes with blue and gold armor and leggings. Weapon: Axe
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2014 7:54:18 GMT -6
Item Lore~ ------------ Swords: Swords come in all variety of of shapes, colors, and usability. Starting from iron swords to steel, and eventually silver swords. These weapons have a multitude of uses inside combat. And are generally used for warfare, and sparring.
Staffs/Staves: More for healing, transporting, or buffing a person. They generally see less combat use, but more supportive use. Ranging from wooden staves to magical ones. Shamans carry these around frequently.
Bows: Bows are used for long range use, and not just for arrows, but also for various things like stones, mini explosives, etc. They are used largely around the continent in warfare. Starting from iron and going up to silver.
Axes: Ranging from iron to silver, these weapons see less use around the continent, but are favored by bandits and pirates as a mean to pillage. They are used by a wide array of people on the battlefield.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2014 8:01:01 GMT -6
Blood~ -------- While a seemingly useless thing, the sort of blood a character has determines whether they can use legendary weapons or not. Blood is divided into two different sets of categories, race and Holy/Fell blood. Race determines the weapons a character can use, while Holy/Fell determines the type of ancestral weapon one can use. Demons start of with neutral, Humans, neutral, and dragons also neutral.
Some characters blood may change as the story unfolds to reveal backstory and lore. Holy blood is divided into Human, God, and Draconic. Fell is divided into Demonic and Hybrid.
Note that Draconic does not have to be tied to a dragon specifically. You'll be surprised at the combination some characters have.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2014 8:02:01 GMT -6
Lore~ -------- War of Races:A devastating war that left humanity leaning on one knee. Preceding that was the Divergement, a civil war between humans for control of the continent. The War of Races left demon kin sealed in the realm of darkness, a place were all demons make their home. War raged across many battlefields to see who would take the surface land. For years it was endless bloodshed, loss of hope, and those bending their knees to the demon king.
This left the people feeling desperate, and alone. Without Naga to guide them, they felt lost. This split humanity into three different religious sects. People who believed Naga would return, People who worshipped Devera as a symbol of a human god that would symbolize their victory, and Grumunists, those that worshipped Grumunda on the very ground he worked on. Making a temporary alliance with the Manaketes, the three heroes were able to drive the demons back to the realm of darkness, granting temporary peace.
Before their deaths, four kingdoms were formed. Atria, heart and Capitol of humankind. It is ruled by a Emperor/empress hierarchy, with small dukedoms here and there to help guide. Dragonia, home of Manaketes, founded by the shaman Fardor himself. Susanoo, founded by the hero sorcerer himself.
Amaterasu, founded by the last of the heroes. The kingdoms grew to prosperity for centuries.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2014 22:53:49 GMT -6
I'm not sure if anyone will check this out, but the CYOA does include classes and some skills. I'm going to post a small poll.
A. Look into the lore of Holy blood.
B. Look into the history of how each race came to be.
C. Look into the history of religions and religious cults and factions.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2014 23:44:46 GMT -6
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Post by yellowclover on Jul 28, 2014 10:53:05 GMT -6
I'll second.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 29, 2014 4:47:16 GMT -6
Rulers and Central locations:
Atria Empire: Atria is the human Capitol in the human world, and is commonly referred to as "The eyes of man." It compasses most of the population of humans, with a few Manaketes there and such. The empire is ruled by Royalty, but also operates as a Dukedom in some cases. There are a few houses most prominent in the dukedom that can make some small decisions if as ruler cannot.
Atria is is ruled by the current Princess, Maria. She is the youngest of rulers on the Etrius continent and in most cases, the most naive and is quite easy to manipulate due to her youth. She has done her best to placate the aggression that Susanoo has directed at them. Atria's landscapes is mostly covered with Forests and rivers, making it a natural farming land and easier to have prosperity.
Holy Knights are the sworn protectors of the crown and are of higher prestige than regular knights. Two of the most prominent being Terra of Hanes, and Jeanne Novel. The empire was founded by one of three heroes, a man known to those in his personal life as Gardin. He paved the way with his legendary lance, Excaligir. ----
Dragonia:
A middle ground between humans and Manaketes, in which the population is a little more even between the two. Unlike Atria, Dragonia is completely ruled by a king/queen hierarchy with no other ruling powers. It was founded by Helen, another of the three legendary heroes. While peculiar and bemusing on whether a Manakete shaman, or a Human warrior founded Dragonia is a heated debate before both sides. However, the truth is that Helen did indeed found Dragonia after her leaving from Atria.
Another strange happening is how succession goes. While strictly succession by family and such, one must be of the blood of Naga, or succeeding the throne is nigh impossible. Before Naga's disappearance rumors of Helen's blood pact with her was a wide truth. As such, those with what people dub "Naga blood." Can rule the throne. The founding name of the house that rules is house Rei. Unfortunately, after the most recent heiress's death, the kingdom has fallen into shamans ruling it, desperately waiting for their rightful prince or Princess to return.
Terrain consists of wide mountains and lakes, making fishing a major profession. Dancing is also prominent here, tying in with Manaketes and humans. Unlike Atria again, it does not have a special defense group, but relies on Manaketes and their fearsome powers in dragon form. Grand Shaman Hantu is the current leader. ------
Susanoo: A kingdom to the Far East of Atria. It is ruled by King Riord, and his children who are future heirs, Princess Lumina and Prince Lazlo. Arguably the most corrupt kingdom on the continent due to Riord's indecisive nature on most if not all matters. Riord is often frail, but makes up with it for what he assumes to be his cunning nature. In reality, his advisor, Silvester, pulls the strings of the kingdom. The ruling family is a descendent of the hero sorcerer, last of the three heroes, and wielder of the fearsome tome, Ragnarok. It is a long passed down heirloom, and can only be wielded by those with "Raglo." Blood, as is every ruler born with.
It like Atria, has a group of esteemed knights with the title Fell Knight. They are considered to be the counterparts of the Holy Knights of Atria.
Terrain consists of mostly Mountains, but makes up for it with large plains with large hunting game.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 29, 2014 5:19:39 GMT -6
More world building!
Very important plot locations:
Castle Hanes: Home of Terra, a holy knight, but more importantly, one of the two prominent dukes in Atria. It is a wide spanning castle with one small lake running across the back. Like the palace, it is made of stone and marble, standing at a tall stature across the western part of the kingdom. Dukes from this castle have been known to be courageous and noble people who go on to become Holy Knights of Atria.
Castle Novel: Home of Jeanne, another holy knight, and importantly, Duchess of it. She is an uncanny Novel due to how many of them become political figures in the kingdom. Nevertheless, she has became an adoptive mother of sorts to a young girl, Azami. Novel is just a bit shorter than Hanes, but makes up for it with having strategists come from the family.
Atrius Palace: home of the Atrian ruling family, and current ruler, Maria. Being descended from the hero who wielded Excaligir. Unlike Dragonia and Susanoo, no "holy" blood is required to wield Excaligir. Being the home of many kings and queens, Atrius is renown for producing great leaders for generations. It is easily the biggest castle in the kingdom. ------
Suns castle: Home to King Riord and his children. Also the Capitol of Susanoo. It is the base of operations for the fell knights, and serves as an aspiring castle to visitors. It isn't as established as the rest of the other castles like its neighbors, but makes up for it with its members being very political savvy and manipulative behind the scenes. Potentially the most dangerous kingdom without the use of weapons.
Suns castle focuses on defense above all, and as such, is the most heavily fortified place. -----
Heim Palace(Dragonia): Named after one of Jugdral's famed 12 crusaders, if only due to his own families blood pact/ritual with Naga. Otherwise, a completely different continent. The palace stands at a huger height than Atrius palace. Adorned in the strongest marble, it is almost impenetrable to siege attacks. It has produced many great rulers just as much as Atria. The most puzzling events is the now deceased princess, who unlike her ancestor Helen, was a manakete, and the kingdoms first Manakete princess.
Unfortunately, her child has not been found, and is most likely presumed dead. -----
Lannister: An island kingdom that borders Dragonia. The ruling family is said to be a distant descendent of Helen. To avoid a succession crisis, the kingdom was formed and is ruled by King Brant and Queen Maerth. Their son Lien, is a kind and nurturing prince. Not many know of this kingdom, but it is close allies with Dragonia. ------
Taguel woodlands: Home to Taguels all around. They make their home in the north of the continent. Commonly keeping I themselves, they have only once fought in human affairs. Taguel King Druda oversees this nearly desert climate home. ----
Edit: I found out that Atria was named a kingdom, when in reality, it is an Empire. Sorry about that. Edit I go!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 29, 2014 8:27:43 GMT -6
As promised, Holy blood.
Holy Blood: A term that was chosen for those whose ancestors made blood pacts with gods, creatures, and deities. Three famous examples are Naga, Devera, and Tir. Divine dragon, goddess, and Demon god respectively. That said, any family can form a blood past or spiritual with two of the remaining figures. Currently, the only family with Naga blood is the Rei's.
Raglo blood is a term deemed for descendants of The Hero Sorcerer of legend. Due to his pact with Devera, all his descendants have it.
Effects: Holy blood does not provide any stat bonuses, or make a unit "god"mode. It simply gives the person better reflexes,endurance, strength, and in some cases, grants a massive boost to Willpower, preventing someone from potentially body swapping with someone. Among that, is being able to wield weapons forged by the deities the person made a pact with. These weapons range in power, and not all are super strong. Some grant various effects. -----
If you want, I can specify more. If not, here's another list:
A. Explore Religions and religious cults.
B. Explore the origin of the Etrius continent.
C. Explain the uses of outrealms, and specific locations.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 29, 2014 8:29:29 GMT -6
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Post by yellowclover on Jul 29, 2014 16:39:09 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2014 6:28:35 GMT -6
Outrealms:
Discovered by the Scholar, Jane, these are phenomenal creations that are located around the world. Etrius has only two outrealms, one to the North and one to the South. Upon entering the out realms, travelers may choose an almost infinite amount of choices. Some include the Bathrealm, training realm, and alternate history realm along with past and future outrealms. While a great boon, it is recommended to make only stops to your most favorite, as traveling to too many can cause the traveler/travelers great insanity, or their body being torn in two due to the strain.
instead of a list this time, I'll let you decide what you want to choose next. As long as it isn't spoilers to the plot, I will do my best to answer.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2014 15:36:54 GMT -6
Supports: Supports are when two units who fight beside each other, gain points to eventually reach four ranks, C, B, A, and S. Every time you pair up with someone you gain 1 point with them. For some characterss this may vary and change to four points.
Skills: Skills are buyable in skill shops. A unit can only hold five skills at a time, so choose wisely.
Side quests and Gaiden chapters: some supports may open up a side quest, sometimes the plot will open up one too. In some supports, a gaiden chapter may be unlocked, further expanding on the units background and history.
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Post by kjmccloud on Aug 2, 2014 18:05:24 GMT -6
List of all the basic classes would be cool, and possible branches if there are any would also be nice. Class, skills, stats, and possible weapons for each class would be nice, unless everyone is their own class?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2014 18:12:14 GMT -6
List of all the basic classes would be cool, and possible branches if there are any would also be nice. Class, skills, stats, and possible weapons for each class would be nice, unless everyone is their own class? I can post classes. Some will be from BL, and others won't. I'm debating the use of Second seals unless it fits with a character's backstory, but I can see the merit. Be warned that it won't be up tonight. I gotta brainstorm some new, and keep the old. Seeing as this is a semi sequel to the Begonian Legacy saga, it probably won't include stats. Balancing gets more tedious, but should be simple. The enemies in this CYOA are far stronger than BL.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 3, 2014 10:20:06 GMT -6
Classes~
Crusader> Knight guard> Divine Knight
Soldier>Knight>General
Soldier>Knight> Axe Knight
Lord> Blade Lord> Master Lord
Lord>Axe Lord> Knight Lord
Cavalier>Lance Knight> General
Cavalier> Lance Knight> Cross Knight
Mymirdon>Swordmaster> Whisperer
Mymirdon> Assassin> Shadow
Thunder Mage> Thunder sorcerer>Thunder Wizard
Wind Mage> Wind sorcerer> Wind Wizard
(All elemental mages follow this pattern)
Mage> Dark Mage> Sorcerer
Mage> Dark Mage> Dark Knight
Priestess>Shaman> Oracle
Cleric> War Cleric> Bishop
Duke>Arch Duke> Grand Duke
Noble> Prince> King
Troubadour> Princess> Master Knight
Troubadour> War Cleric> Bishop
Manakete> Dark dragon/Divine/Mage, etc> Manakete God/Manakete Royal(special case. Provided some things happen in the story. Only one character can get this as their second unique class, I speak of Manakete God.)
Demon>Demon Knight> Demon Crusader
Demon God>none>none
Dancer> Dancer Knight> Performer
Bard> Music Knight> Performer
Mercenary>Hero> Champion
Sword Knight> Sword Hero> Sword General
I'm sorry if it is hard to tell which are branching, I hope that you know all the classes. While we don't operate on a leveling system, I'll do my best to balance characters, so it remains fun. Tough, but not impossible.
On that note, I'll post anything of note here telling if a character unlocked a class set.
Your current list of people:
Mark, Sword Knight
Items: Steel sword
Reclass options: Soldier, Mymirdon currently.
Kuro, Crusader
Reclass options: Demon, Soldier, Archer, Lord. ------
Nearly forgot these two...
Pegasus Rider> Pegasus Knight > Dark Flier.
Skills like galeforce can be obtained in tier two classes, so no worry about having to wait to tier three.
Wyvern Rider> Wyvern Knight> Wyvern Lord/Lordess
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Post by Deleted on Aug 5, 2014 6:54:34 GMT -6
Okay, that wasn't my best update, but it was something I suppose.
Status update:
Name: Azami Class:Lord Items: Iron axe Skills:Fury,des: when enraged, the user deals more damage
Name: Aless Class:Cavalier Items:Iron lance Skills: Phase, des: this unit can ignore most terrain, except for high mountains and oceans.
Name:Hark Class:Cavalier Items:Iron sword Skills:Phase, des: this unit can ignore most terrain, except for high mountains and oceans.
Name: Isolde Class: Pegasus Knight Items: Iron lance Skills: Rest, des: when the unit is not attacking, they heal slightly.
Name: Edan Class:Fire Mage Items: Fire tome Skills: Flame, des: only useable with a fire tome. Has a random chance of shielding the unit.
Name: Arashi Class: Lord Items: Iron sword Skills: Pierce, des: a strike that can penetrate armor. Has a random chance at working, but useful.
Name: Mark Class: Sword Knight items: Iron sword Skills: Zantesuken, des: strikes the enemy at blinding speed. Random chance at activating.
Name: Kuro Class:Crusader Items: Tsung and Shin(his twins swords if anyone is wondering.) Skills: Crusade(a strike that channels the users rage or anger.)
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Post by Deleted on Aug 6, 2014 20:41:30 GMT -6
Hrm is there anything someone wants to know?
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