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Post by GX1997 on Aug 25, 2015 19:03:08 GMT -6
You guys don't have to agree on things. But what you do have to do is stop clawing at each others' eyes when you don't. I'm fed up with these exact shenanigans. And I'm fed up with people pointing fingers, as if only one person is behind the problems. I don't want any more finger pointing. I don't want anymore feuding. I want everyone involved to act like the adults they are and resolve problems peacefully and with maturity.
That's it. After this I start modding people. No more warnings for any one of you, since we all know the standards we're expected to mantain.
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Post by Neo on Aug 25, 2015 19:10:56 GMT -6
... Right. Sorry. You guys know I tend to take things a bit too personally when I'm tired, especially when it concerns my writing or characters.
CDM, Emppy, GX, and everyone else, I'm sorry. I think I'll just go take that nap now.
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Post by SummerCrow on Aug 25, 2015 19:21:36 GMT -6
I want you to know, I ain't criticizing your writing in general, I ain't trying to tell you how to do things. I'm just saying I found this one, specific moment... uncomfortable. Which, when you write as much as you do, is going to happen sometimes - Hell, I've written scenes that I look back on as not OK. I ain't tryna make it personal.
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Post by Neo on Aug 25, 2015 19:46:27 GMT -6
Speaking of character building, do we want to do any on the train? Or are we just going to skip to them arriving at the mountain station?
Timeline wise, they'll reach the mountain station by around midday tomorrow.
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Post by Neo on Aug 25, 2015 21:31:56 GMT -6
I left out the torture and village scenes, to make it PG instead of R and to shorten the post, and it still took me an hour.
.... Well, that's probably due to me being tired.
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Post by GX1997 on Aug 25, 2015 21:36:19 GMT -6
I left out the torture and village scenes, to make it PG instead of R and to shorten the post, and it still took me an hour. .... Well, that's probably due to me being tired. I like the post a lot. It leaves them as cryptic figures, which is even scarier. |
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Post by Neo on Aug 25, 2015 21:54:15 GMT -6
I left out the torture and village scenes, to make it PG instead of R and to shorten the post, and it still took me an hour. .... Well, that's probably due to me being tired. I like the post a lot. It leaves them as cryptic figures, which is even scarier. Yay! I'm glad you like it.  I was honestly afraid the scene would be underwhelming. I'm actually really nervous to write for Hypnos. |
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Post by Neo on Aug 26, 2015 1:29:57 GMT -6
Finally got around to proofreading the scene.
"A lone participate"
^ The reason you don't write when exhausted.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 26, 2015 5:30:01 GMT -6
Even the bad guys ignore Griggles.
Is that his superpower?
/rainbowtext
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Post by Neo on Aug 26, 2015 5:49:42 GMT -6
Even the bad guys ignore Griggles. Is that his superpower? /rainbowtext We could so totally make that his superpower.  |
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Post by SummerCrow on Aug 26, 2015 7:39:48 GMT -6
Even the bad guys ignore Griggles. Is that his superpower? /rainbowtext "Oh, woe is me. The guys who torture people to death for fun aren't paying attention to me/don't consider me a threat." Dunno what you're complaining about. Starting the morning post. |
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Post by Neo on Aug 26, 2015 8:54:48 GMT -6
You know, Crow, you could have just said Sounders was able to contact G. And made up something simple, like G promising to help.
Cause honestly, I completely forgot. But my mistake, the author's mistake, isn't the character's mistake. There's absolutely no reason in-story she wouldn't answer his call.
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Post by SummerCrow on Aug 26, 2015 9:17:53 GMT -6
Oh... I kinda assumed she didn't because of... y'know, all the other stuff going on. Being busy dealing with... character showing up half-dead and sending other people out to collect Jurian. I was pointing that out as a "oh and by the way we're not the only ones with **** going down" thing.
So, knowing I had a reason, still want it changed?
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Post by Neo on Aug 26, 2015 9:22:46 GMT -6
Nah, that's fine. You don't have to change it. But I'll have G- Oh, let's face it, everyone already knows its Zalia- return his call when I post next.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 26, 2015 11:04:07 GMT -6
More like "This guy who betrayed us and knows the new girl totally isn't anything that could be worth mentioning, even though he's a massive potential leak"
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Post by Neo on Aug 26, 2015 11:15:14 GMT -6
More like "This guy who betrayed us and knows the new girl totally isn't anything that could be worth mentioning, even though he's a massive potential leak" But what exactly does Grigori know? Hmm? He knows the Guild name, he's seen Athena's face, he heard Athena briefly refer to someone as the "Demon King", and that's about it. He doesn't know any secrets whatsoever. He's also an emotional wreck right now, and hasn't displayed any significant combat abilities thus far. As far as Hypnos is concerned, he's not even remotely close to a priority. He's someone they can dispatch at any time, who is of no real threat. Seriously, Golurk. I know what I'm writing, and I know my own characters. You don't. |
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Post by Neo on Aug 26, 2015 11:44:26 GMT -6
Though that attitude is what will eventually lead to their downfall. Since Grigori will be one of the key reasons Silver Chimera is actually able to defeat Hypnos.
Anyway, I desperately need a nap. So don't expect to hear from me for a few hours.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 26, 2015 13:13:43 GMT -6
Go nap. Grumpy dragon isn't a fun dragon.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 26, 2015 13:14:00 GMT -6
Go nap. Grumpy dragon isn't a fun dragon.
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Post by Neo on Aug 26, 2015 22:06:45 GMT -6
Okay, so. Things left to do:
Post for Senna.
Have Athena send Than-Than on her little fetch quest.
Start the Athena VS Jurian battle.
Not necessarily in that order.
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