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Post by SummerCrow on Nov 22, 2015 22:55:34 GMT -6
So I can do some edits to make Serlene and Shalla not mentioned or they can be "detained" and shortly kicked out. Which do you prefer Crow and Mr.X? I don't know. Shalla's the one paying, so she's who Talia's listening to and following. This is a problem for me. |
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Post by GX1997 on Nov 22, 2015 23:04:54 GMT -6
So I can do some edits to make Serlene and Shalla not mentioned or they can be "detained" and shortly kicked out. Which do you prefer Crow and Mr.X? I don't know. Shalla's the one paying, so she's who Talia's listening to and following. This is a problem for me. It wouldn't be if someone else could offer more money for doing something that involves sticking around for that part of the plot. If someone makes a better offer for less work, it would be stupid not to take it, and I think Talia is the type of person who would recognize that she should jump ship under those conditions, even if it's with a "no hard feelings" statement to Shalla.  |
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Post by SummerCrow on Nov 22, 2015 23:11:39 GMT -6
I don't know. Shalla's the one paying, so she's who Talia's listening to and following. This is a problem for me. It wouldn't be if someone else could offer more money for doing something that involves sticking around for that part of the plot. If someone makes a better offer for less work, it would be stupid not to take it, and I think Talia is the type of person who would recognize that she should jump ship under those conditions, even if it's with a "no hard feelings" statement to Shalla. The thing is that she's already working the job at a huge discount because it gives her an excuse to hang around Catie. Plus it kind of goes against the image I had of her, or at least where I wanted to take her... But I guess it's not too late to change things up with her, since she's barely been around at all. I'll let X chip in. But it'll probably boil down to whether Fen's back before we actually get things moving again. |
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Post by GX1997 on Nov 22, 2015 23:12:55 GMT -6
It wouldn't be if someone else could offer more money for doing something that involves sticking around for that part of the plot. If someone makes a better offer for less work, it would be stupid not to take it, and I think Talia is the type of person who would recognize that she should jump ship under those conditions, even if it's with a "no hard feelings" statement to Shalla. The thing is that she's already working the job at a huge discount because it gives her an excuse to hang around Catie. Plus it kind of goes against the image I had of her, or at least where I wanted to take her... But I guess it's not too late to change things up with her, since she's barely been around at all. I'll let X chip in. But it'll probably boil down to whether Fen's back before we actually get things moving again. I understand. It's just an option to consider if it comes to that. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 23, 2015 11:00:20 GMT -6
Well maybe this can work. Maybe Serlen and Shalla decide to head out and investigate the Black king or maybe they decide to come back when things are a little less hostile. (This way it gives Fennekin's character a chance to always hop back in but they dont hold up the scene if he dosent come back) Now as far as Talia is concerned what if something happens off screen where Talia is brought out by Shalla essentially making her a free agent again. Then Baron can go to Talia and offer her a contract to protect Catie should anything goes down. Talia for reasons may be willing to look over Catie and essentially Talia would be under contract for Baron. Of course Caties safety is everything to Baron so money is a non issue We can assume Shalla has the money to pay off Talia but then if Fennekin returns Talia can be like sure i can work for you again but its gonna cost you  . This way Fennekin's character are around and just hangibg around but they arent interfering with plot progression if hes gone for a long time. Mr. Crow Smex how does this sound??? |
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Post by SummerCrow on Nov 23, 2015 15:18:31 GMT -6
I had two possible ideas. One, "wenever finalized the contract" and invent some kind of ritual to go with it, leave Shalla because she doesn't want to go. Two, rewrite a bit so Shalren got locked out somehow. With no way to get back, Talia switches to defending the rest of Shalla's group.
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Post by SwordMasterEX on Nov 29, 2015 19:50:54 GMT -6
Idea 2 Crow. Let's do this.
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Post by SummerCrow on Nov 29, 2015 23:39:02 GMT -6
K. I'll edit stuff to make it work... uh...
Not tonight. Not tomorrow night. Can't Tuesday night. Or Wednesday night. Maybe on Thursday, but I'm probably just going to collapse the minute I get home. Or if I find a few minutes during the day one day.
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Post by SwordMasterEX on Nov 29, 2015 23:43:44 GMT -6
Not tonight? Not even for a Crabbit snack?
My text box just suddenly started acting up. Weird.
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Post by SummerCrow on Nov 30, 2015 0:03:26 GMT -6
Not tonight? Not even for a Crabbit snack? My text box just suddenly started acting up. Weird. I should really be writing an another essay about the p53 apoptotic pathway, but... eh. Sure. I'll rush through it, get enough of a backbone for you to work on. Pretty it up later if I need to. |
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Post by SwordMasterEX on Nov 30, 2015 0:06:23 GMT -6
Not tonight? Not even for a Crabbit snack? My text box just suddenly started acting up. Weird. I should really be writing an another essay about the p53 apoptotic pathway, but... eh. Sure. I'll rush through it, get enough of a backbone for you to work on. Pretty it up later if I need to. |
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Post by SummerCrow on Nov 30, 2015 0:25:08 GMT -6
I should really be writing an another essay about the p53 apoptotic pathway, but... eh. Sure. I'll rush through it, get enough of a backbone for you to work on. Pretty it up later if I need to. I edited my last 2 posts. Made a change to Talia's speech tic so it only applies to when she's actually talking, and not in her own head. I'll need to remember that. I also un-redded something in your last post you may want to change. Or re-red and leave in, your call. Lessee here... Moonlight Ray, Demarcation, Icicle Fall, Colorful Rain, Metal Fatigue, Mercury Poison, Emerald Megalith, Luna Clock, Eternal Meek, Scarlet Shoot, Red Magic, Silent Selene, Royal Flare, Philosopher's Stone, Four of a Kind, Laevatein, Kagome, Kagome, Maze of Love, Starbow Break, Catadioptric, Counter Clock, And Then Will There Be None?... EoSD had a ton of really, really fun spell cards. Absolutely loved the EX stage, even if it took me probably literally 100 tries. **** QED: Ripples of 495 Years though. **** that card so hard. |
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Post by SwordMasterEX on Nov 30, 2015 0:48:45 GMT -6
The red is back but with edits.I can't even make it past stage 1 on Hard. The rust is too real.
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Post by Neo on Jan 23, 2016 16:34:35 GMT -6
So, I guess Arc is ignoring Aanu then? |
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Jan 23, 2016 16:37:46 GMT -6
I had no idea who that was supposed to be so I ignored it |
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Post by Neo on Jan 23, 2016 16:40:11 GMT -6
I had no idea who that was supposed to be so I ignored it I thought it was fairly obvious. But I mean, Arc wouldn't know who he is anyway. So just respond in-character. Unless you want Pearl to answer. |
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Jan 23, 2016 16:57:49 GMT -6
I honestly have no idea who that is |
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Post by SwordMasterEX on Jan 23, 2016 17:10:25 GMT -6
I figure since this has been a long time coming, I should probably start posting it now. So here. Enjoy. Religion and Religious practices in Shiryu- Section 1, Chapter 1: The PantheonAanu(Ah-Nu): The Chief Deity of the Shiryuan Pantheon, and the God of War, Peace, Justice, Divine Retribution and the Ocean. He is usually depicted by artists as a giant man, over a thousand feet tall with a long flowing beard, walking through the ocean, wielding the Trident of War and the Crown of Peace. The duality He represents- War and Peace, Justice and Vengeance, and the wrathful and giving nature of the ocean- lies at the very heart of the Shiryuan people. He is the most beloved of all the gods. His wife is Dheynilia, the Goddess of the Sky, the Harvest, and the Land, and his Mistress is Nemicia, the Goddess of Love and Beauty. His children are Salokmir, God of Strength, Creation, and Wisdom, Kieannu, Goddess of Time and Balance, Vigil, God of Man and Gatekeeper of Heaven, Raizel, God of Fire and the Forge, Archon, Goddess of Order and Chaos, and Eya, Goddess of Plague, Jealousy, Hatred, and Destruction. Dheynilia(Day-Nil-Lia): The Queen of the Gods, and the wife of Aanu. While Her husband's domain encompasses the vast ocean, Her domain stretches over both the land and the sky. She is perhaps the wisest of all the gods, and is often the mediator during disputes. It is for this reason She is also believed to be the Patroness of Diplomats and Politicians; not to be confused with Dar'Valnu, the Goddess of Plots, Tricks, and Magic. However, some texts state that Dar'Valnu is simply an aspect of Dheynilia; In times of Stability, Day. In times of Chaos, Valnu, which is translated as 'Night' in the Shiryuan language. For this reason, She is often considered the Goddess of Order and Chaos as well. However, most religious scholars attribute Chaos and Order to Her daughter, the Goddess Archon. She is depicted as a beautiful woman in a gown of starlight and a crown of leaves, riding in a golden chariot of Sunfire, which is pulled by Akmanu, the Winds of Fate. She is often simply known as 'Day', expect in the most stringent texts and ceremonies. |
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Post by Neo on Jan 23, 2016 17:17:23 GMT -6
I honestly have no idea who that is Big godking dude of Shiryu. You know Arc is in the Shiryuan Pantheon's palace, right? |
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Jan 23, 2016 17:26:23 GMT -6
...No, I did not know... |
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