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Post by GX1997 on Oct 26, 2014 20:24:33 GMT -6
Sorry, I see feels, and feels need to be felt. I didn't notice any other errors though. Only other thing I could really do is try to make jokes that wouldn't amuse me as much, or advise you to cut out the fat, like Golurk's notes describing the sections, or the spell section. In my defense, I asked Golurk help with that, and we were able to eliminate a lot of it. It also would have been hard for me to edit all of what remained with my iPod acting up.
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Post by AlmosDug on Oct 26, 2014 20:27:44 GMT -6
It's understandable, doll. It's not even really necessary, with how rarely anyone looks there. Just me and my tendencies.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Oct 26, 2014 20:28:03 GMT -6
/shot I was just trying to see if you wanted my help with that
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Post by GX1997 on Oct 26, 2014 20:50:09 GMT -6
/shot I was just trying to see if you wanted my help with that I would like your help, and I was just about to ask you.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Oct 26, 2014 20:54:08 GMT -6
/bleedingfromgunshotwound
O-Okay.
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Post by SwordMasterEX on Oct 26, 2014 20:56:41 GMT -6
So I just realized all the guys are shorter than 182.88 centimeters and all the girls are taller. The height reversal is real.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Oct 26, 2014 21:01:27 GMT -6
Well, one is a Half-Orc and the other is from a genetically diverse tribe of near superhuman females.
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Post by GX1997 on Oct 26, 2014 21:02:32 GMT -6
/bleedingfromgunshotwound O-Okay. The worst thing I said was how I couldn't post the stuff about Reyna's clan. I did tell them how you helped me fill stuff on the character sheet out and got rid of a whole lot of the fluff. So what's wrong? Also, SMEX, that's because the only girls happen to be (a) half orc, or (b) from an amazon style tribe who use different heights than regular humans.
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Post by GX1997 on Oct 26, 2014 21:03:43 GMT -6
Well, one is a Half-Orc and the other is from a genetically diverse tribe of near superhuman females. And once again, you have decided to show off your ninja skills. Well done.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Oct 26, 2014 21:06:38 GMT -6
/still bleeding
The wording seemed a little harsh on my end.
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Post by GX1997 on Oct 26, 2014 21:08:16 GMT -6
Sorry, I see feels, and feels need to be felt. I didn't notice any other errors though. Only other thing I could really do is try to make jokes that wouldn't amuse me as much, or advise you to cut out the fat, like Golurk's notes describing the sections, or the spell section. In my defense, I asked Golurk help with that, and we were able to eliminate a lot of it. It also would have been hard for me to edit all of what remained with my iPod acting up.
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Post by SwordMasterEX on Oct 26, 2014 21:10:00 GMT -6
Also, SMEX, that's because the only girls happen to be (a) half orc, or (b) from an amazon style tribe who use different heights than regular humans. You guys make it sound like I'm complaining. That was my same thought process when making the Nymphs- I have an idea for Austur! Now to find the motivation to post it.
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Post by AlmosDug on Oct 26, 2014 21:10:37 GMT -6
*Doesn't get Golurk's problem* *Throws Band-Aid anyway* You're doing most of the heavy-lifting around here Golurk, and if I'm being honest, I figured it was still the same thing going on. *Ignores GX's prior patchwork*
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Post by GX1997 on Oct 26, 2014 21:11:28 GMT -6
Where is this clan located? Clan functions? Ethnicity? In the jungles, savannah, other tropical, isolated places where hunting is easy because prey is plentiful. I'm not sure exactly what ethnicity the clan would be, but they would have very tan or dark skin, hair ranging from light to red, and mostly green or brown eyes. Yes, this would be so unlikely in reality, but this isn't the real world, so whatever. They may have to be a group descended from several others. Also, given their habits, the would be very diverse genetically, and only have started making an effort to keep their current distinct appearance recently, making them a lot more picky about who they choose to mate with. They're very into choosing the best possible partner. Additionally, like the amazons, they only keep their female offspring. The children are raised by the young women who have yet to be sent on their traditional coming af age journey, and a small number of the women who were, in the eyes of the clan, rather unsuccessful on their own journey. It's these women (who have had at least one child of course) who generally nurse the infants, as it's rare for the child's mother to do so herself. The young are taught to hunt and how to provide for them selves, while they are instilled with the traditions and laws of the tribe. Since most of the children are always fairly close in age, the generations in the tribe are clearly defined. Once a generation reaches a certain age, they become the primary defense for the tribe member and their home, as they learn the stoic attitudes they will need on their journey, and prepare themselves mentally for the journey. A few years later, the generations shift duties again, and the generation that once acted as the tribes soldiers are sent out for their coming of age rites, as the next youngest generation takes their place. Within like the next four or so years, they return to the tribe, where they are greeted by judgement on their varying degrees of success. This decides who will lead the village next, who will train the young, and who will face dishonor and shame. Some may rarely be exiled, though most who performed miserably in the elder's eyes will simply take the most menial jobs. So their entire life hinges on the results of their journey, and not only meeting the elder's expectations, but fighting tooth and nail to be better than the other women so they can have a bright future. It's actually very depressing when you think about it. But since they are such an insular culture, they know no law greater than the good of the tribe. Because that's all they know, they are very unlikely to change their ways and seek an independent life outside of the clan. Yay, it worked! Also, Golurk was not expecting me to have such specific things in mind, so he was pretty shocked. Also, since Golurk hasn't guessed yet, does anyone else want to take a guess about what the point of the journey is?
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Post by AlmosDug on Oct 26, 2014 21:17:45 GMT -6
Finding mates that are suitable for the tribe's needs, such as expert hunters or smiths, maybe even mages for specific problems.
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Post by SwordMasterEX on Oct 26, 2014 21:19:34 GMT -6
The point of the journey? As a guess maybe to develop leadership skills.
And to find a mate.
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Post by AlmosDug on Oct 26, 2014 21:20:36 GMT -6
The point of the journey? As a guess maybe to develop leadership skills. And to find a mate. Great minds, great minds.
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Post by GX1997 on Oct 26, 2014 21:31:18 GMT -6
The point of the journey? As a guess maybe to develop leadership skills. And to find a mate. Great minds, great minds. Do both of you really think I would be the type of person who would imply something like that? Because if so, you would be right.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Oct 26, 2014 21:42:45 GMT -6
Was it not obvious?
I mean, how else would they get males for procreation? How would they maintain such healthy diversity in addition to creating a continuously strong and sustained population?
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Post by AlmosDug on Oct 26, 2014 21:43:42 GMT -6
Pfffttt >implying I was thinking
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