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Post by Neo on Sept 5, 2014 7:07:30 GMT -6
Five minutes isn't a proper cool down either. You've seen how much I've nerfed Ethan's abilities, right? Let's see... Maybe once every 12 in story hours? Hmm... Maybe two or three hours. A spell like that would need a cool down even for the strongest of characters, and Seraph was mortal, even before traveling through the Dimensional Rift, which we've already established weakens those who pass through it.
I'm not trying to sound unreasonable, but that ability is kinda OP. Also, your description of Gae Bolg has me worried. You did actually balance this character, right?
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2014 7:34:39 GMT -6
Your right.... Hrm, once every 16 hours would be adequate time. My description of Gae Bolg description of Anything was a joke at the end  . If it could pierce anything, that would be too OP. It can't pierce through modern day things. |
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Post by Neo on Sept 5, 2014 7:46:50 GMT -6
Okay, that's good. You had me worried for a sec. 16 hours should be fine.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2014 7:49:56 GMT -6
Actually swapped to 24 hours. Sometimes I forget how OP things are. I gotta stop being so compeititive....
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Post by empireoffire on Sept 5, 2014 13:05:56 GMT -6
Name: Seraph Chryses "God of Light" [...] Allies: Selene, his twin sister, Kuro, an acquaintance. --- Name: Selene Chryses [...] CardCharacter: Yes~ Kuro [...] Allies: Seraph Name: Kuro Glaw [...] Card Character: Selene's ------ Name: Fenrir "Fenrir the Wolf King" RP/ CYOA or origin: The Realm of Austur. Card Character: Yes~Adelle ---- Name: Adelle [...] Card Character: Yes 1) You're putting characters into other character's cards while at the same time calling them their own card character despite the fact that the OP says Allies: (Minions, familiars, and pets the character fights alongside with that do not get their own card. This includes animal companions and Pokemon.) 2) You're often saying that a Card Character is a Card Character to... a Card Character. When they get brought into OZ, that basically means they'll both fall to the floor as cards unable to do anything. 3) You didn't even mention who Adelle is a Card Character for. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2014 14:47:51 GMT -6
Sorry, was in a rush at that point. So, I need to remove the Kuro from Selene? Notice in the OP, but had too much class work to go back and edit.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2014 14:51:56 GMT -6
All Emp, did I do it right this time?
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Post by empireoffire on Sept 5, 2014 15:03:02 GMT -6
All Emp, did I do it right this time? Remove the people still under the Allies tab and you're good. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2014 15:06:49 GMT -6
Alright.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2014 15:11:40 GMT -6
Finished again!
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Post by Neo on Sept 5, 2014 15:12:17 GMT -6
I just now realized I made the same mistake, and placed people under allies. ;P
My bad.
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Post by empireoffire on Sept 5, 2014 15:17:55 GMT -6
I just now realized I made the same mistake, and placed people under allies. ;P My bad. How did I miss this? How did my EDITOR miss this?! |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2014 15:20:00 GMT -6
I just now realized I made the same mistake, and placed people under allies. ;P My bad. How did I miss this? How did my EDITOR miss this?! Neo used his infinity dragon+2 powers. Luckily for me, I have Rightful universal guardian+8 |
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Post by Neo on Sept 5, 2014 15:27:47 GMT -6
That's Super Infinity God Dragon+2, to you. Get the name right.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2014 15:34:52 GMT -6
I think I meant Universal God... Dragons have no power here!
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Post by Neo on Sept 5, 2014 15:58:30 GMT -6
I just now realized I made the same mistake, and placed people under allies. ;P My bad. How did I miss this? How did my EDITOR miss this?! Maybe because the name of my MC's daughter resembles the descriptor of a certain Pokemon? And so you subconsciously thought she was a Pokemon? Eh, who knows. *shrugs and whistles innocently* |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2014 16:36:28 GMT -6
I have finally found my dream. TOE:EC has fufilled that dream.
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Post by SwordMasterEX on Sept 5, 2014 17:05:36 GMT -6
Okay, I'm bored and Writer's Blocking hard on AusturRP/CYOA of origin: The Realm of Austur Card Character?: Yes ~ Irving Weapon: A greatsword capable of cleaving stone. The hilt possesses a stone of Mythril that can enchant the blade to create thunderous mini-Tornados when swung fiercely enough. Notable Traits, Powers and Abilities: - A user of the 3rd circle of magick. - Can distort space, allowing for the castor's body to bend and contort in comical fashions should they want to (i.e. toon physics). - Can enlarge certain body parts for physical actions. - Can pull various items from a pocket dimension, including his greatsword. Can open rifts beside them to fire arrows from or rifts above their enemies to drop anvils onto their heads. - Due to toon physics, physical strikes have little effect on him. Magic must be used to fight this person effectively. - Can cause a giant slash in reality to open up, signified by a straight line of distorted images being seen. Incredibly devastating, but needs a breather before being able to do it again. - Can disappear into a pocket dimension and reappear elsewhere. When he reappears, he does so through a wooden door spawning out from nowhere. - Can swim in air. Allies: N/A Tech level: Medieval I can sympathize. Also, IT'S FAUST! *immediately goes to watch Xrd -SIGN- trailer for 50th time* And Mister_X, you don't want to have post training Baron? |
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Post by empireoffire on Sept 5, 2014 17:18:46 GMT -6
Okay, I'm bored and Writer's Blocking hard on AusturRP/CYOA of origin: The Realm of Austur Card Character?: Yes ~ Irving Weapon: A greatsword capable of cleaving stone. The hilt possesses a stone of Mythril that can enchant the blade to create thunderous mini-Tornados when swung fiercely enough. Notable Traits, Powers and Abilities: - A user of the 3rd circle of magick. - Can distort space, allowing for the castor's body to bend and contort in comical fashions should they want to (i.e. toon physics). - Can enlarge certain body parts for physical actions. - Can pull various items from a pocket dimension, including his greatsword. Can open rifts beside them to fire arrows from or rifts above their enemies to drop anvils onto their heads. - Due to toon physics, physical strikes have little effect on him. Magic must be used to fight this person effectively. - Can cause a giant slash in reality to open up, signified by a straight line of distorted images being seen. Incredibly devastating, but needs a breather before being able to do it again. - Can disappear into a pocket dimension and reappear elsewhere. When he reappears, he does so through a wooden door spawning out from nowhere. - Can swim in air. Allies: N/A Tech level: Medieval I can sympathize. Also, IT'S FAUST! *immediately goes to watch Xrd -SIGN- trailer for 50th time* And Mister_X, you don't want to have post training Baron? It's like Faust and Death from Soul Eater having a baby. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2014 17:21:08 GMT -6
So, how long until this starts?
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