Post by SwordMasterEX on Dec 31, 2013 2:56:26 GMT -6
Welcome to my humble abode!
This place is where the people who join my guild get to participate in scenes from my CYOA: Heroes of Yore (transferring soon). If you want to join, then PM me and I'll tell you how. This is of course only the first drafts of these types of scene, so they are edited before being applied to the actual story. Without further ado let's finish this tavern scene Neo and Cheese.
Three men are gathered at a tavern. The middle one addresses the one on the left. "So Neo when it comes to the Matrix squeals clearly Reloaded over Revolutions, right?"
The man with a crazy Afro shrugs arguing a third point "I never cared much for either. Now, the original... Ah, now that was a work of art. A genuine masterpiece, through and through. A revolutionary idea for the time. It's too bad they felt the need to ruin such a glorious series with half baked sequels. Sequels almost always ruin everything, I'm telling you. Show me one sequel that was better than the original, and I'll cough up an entire pouch of gold." A grin emerges from his certainty, "Too bad for you such a thing is nonexistent..."
The center one replies "Your memory must fail you because Aliens over Alien, Terminator 2 over Terminator, Army of Darkness over Evil Dead, and The Good The Bad and The Ugly over Fistful of Dollars. Need I go on? Cause I could, so you have that gold ready?" He returns the left man's grin with an air of smugness before turning to the man on the right. "Weigh in on this Cheese, Reloaded or Revolutions? Sequels that are better than the originals?"
The man on the right in a tuxedo and flip-flops answers "The pecking order is The Matrix, then The Animatrix, then The Matrix Reloaded and last The Matrix Revolutions, so ultimately I agree. I like The Empire Strikes Back a lot more than A New Hope."
Concurring with him the center one in gilded robes says, "The Empire Strikes Back is definitely superior to the original." A shirtless mage enters and sits down next to the man in the tuxedo. "Speaking of Star Wars, I feel a disturbance in the force." The center one calls out to the man, "Excuse me Mr.Mage, but do you know someone by the name of Dante~"
The blue haired man responds in an annoyed manner, "And if the answer you seek is positive, what of it?"
The man in the Tuxedo then says,"We seek no answer, for it is known to us all. But what's the harm in being polite, eh? Have a drink, break the ice. You tempted?"
The one in glossy black pants follows suit with, "Why, of course he's tempted. There's not a man alive who wouldn't be by a warm mug of mead. Although... My companion here is correct, O glorious mage. Not a breath of knowledge in this world or any other is unknown to us. However intelligent and clever you think yourself mage, we are infinitely more so. You would be wise to remember that." He proceeds to casually sip his wine glass like a smooth villain.
The center one rolls his eyes as if denouncing their claims, "Well then I'd ask you to deliver a gift which is already in his possession. I'd do it myself, but he had other plans."
(go ahead and continue from there)
This place is where the people who join my guild get to participate in scenes from my CYOA: Heroes of Yore (transferring soon). If you want to join, then PM me and I'll tell you how. This is of course only the first drafts of these types of scene, so they are edited before being applied to the actual story. Without further ado let's finish this tavern scene Neo and Cheese.
Three men are gathered at a tavern. The middle one addresses the one on the left. "So Neo when it comes to the Matrix squeals clearly Reloaded over Revolutions, right?"
The man with a crazy Afro shrugs arguing a third point "I never cared much for either. Now, the original... Ah, now that was a work of art. A genuine masterpiece, through and through. A revolutionary idea for the time. It's too bad they felt the need to ruin such a glorious series with half baked sequels. Sequels almost always ruin everything, I'm telling you. Show me one sequel that was better than the original, and I'll cough up an entire pouch of gold." A grin emerges from his certainty, "Too bad for you such a thing is nonexistent..."
The center one replies "Your memory must fail you because Aliens over Alien, Terminator 2 over Terminator, Army of Darkness over Evil Dead, and The Good The Bad and The Ugly over Fistful of Dollars. Need I go on? Cause I could, so you have that gold ready?" He returns the left man's grin with an air of smugness before turning to the man on the right. "Weigh in on this Cheese, Reloaded or Revolutions? Sequels that are better than the originals?"
The man on the right in a tuxedo and flip-flops answers "The pecking order is The Matrix, then The Animatrix, then The Matrix Reloaded and last The Matrix Revolutions, so ultimately I agree. I like The Empire Strikes Back a lot more than A New Hope."
Concurring with him the center one in gilded robes says, "The Empire Strikes Back is definitely superior to the original." A shirtless mage enters and sits down next to the man in the tuxedo. "Speaking of Star Wars, I feel a disturbance in the force." The center one calls out to the man, "Excuse me Mr.Mage, but do you know someone by the name of Dante~"
The blue haired man responds in an annoyed manner, "And if the answer you seek is positive, what of it?"
The man in the Tuxedo then says,"We seek no answer, for it is known to us all. But what's the harm in being polite, eh? Have a drink, break the ice. You tempted?"
The one in glossy black pants follows suit with, "Why, of course he's tempted. There's not a man alive who wouldn't be by a warm mug of mead. Although... My companion here is correct, O glorious mage. Not a breath of knowledge in this world or any other is unknown to us. However intelligent and clever you think yourself mage, we are infinitely more so. You would be wise to remember that." He proceeds to casually sip his wine glass like a smooth villain.
The center one rolls his eyes as if denouncing their claims, "Well then I'd ask you to deliver a gift which is already in his possession. I'd do it myself, but he had other plans."
(go ahead and continue from there)