The Eden Saga: Of Lore and Things

Eh from Ambrosia, I would say two days at most to be close to them. Depending if they left the dukedom... If they stay, probably three days.

That's not too bad, then. And Deo would want to keep tabs on the Dukedom's capitol. I can write them in around that.

Are you kidding? I was waiting for X or Yellow to post beer I started again. Everything? Does that also include EH? It better include EH!

On a more rational note, yes, I am ready to de- I mean rebuild this! Let's go!

Get started, soldier!

And yellow disappeared, so just have her see Marrh walk down the stairs, as written in my last post yesterday.

Shiva seems.... Really dumb and insecure to me. She attacks someone, for absolutely no reason, in what is obviously a temple(There's no way you could mistake it for something else), and now she's plotting revenge. Because she acted rashly and foolishly. She wants revenge on them... Because she attacked them. And if you don't want your dog to get hurt, why the hell are you bringing it with you in the first place, instead of leaving the dog at home, like any normal person would?

Yes, room for character development, I know. But I still don't like her. Hopefully, my character doesn't meet her. She would be in for a rude awakening.

Why thank you for your input Neo I greatly appreciate it. And you think that's dumb and insecure you must really want to push things. So in order to clear the air let me say some things. First off me crash in I into Fen Fen was his idea b/c I was going to have Charlie take his pole thinking it was a stick and they chase him.

You know why she dosent give a f*** that its taking place inside a temple. B/c oh no she happens to be one of those people who think that the divines turned there back on her so she's like screw them. B/c they are not people not like that who get turned off by religion or anything like that.

Why does Shiva treat Marrh one way b/c get this he's untested 17 yr. Old and to Shiva was somebody not worth his respect go figure. Teak was just some authority figure and she though she was taking Shiva lightyly so oh my god shes defiant and didn't want to go down swinging.

I know Neo probably missed this but believe or not Shiva actually showed respect to the pope oh my god.

And I know Neo hates dogs w/ a passion and his bias got in the way of this but believe it or not people actually care about dogs more then humans. To Shiva Charlie is a more reliable and more trust worthy partner then any human. Also I am pretty sure police use dogs when they are out and about and those dogs are taken into dangerous situations.

I know this is of little importance to you Mr. "My characters are above criticism and somebody ever said what I said about X's character I would be all Dragon fire, brim stone, war path, everyone must pay," Neo. The reason Charlie is a German Shepard b/c get this I used a real life example b/c cops use German Shepherd are actually used to track stuff, take down bad criminals, etc. This is why Charlie is a German Shepard and not a poodle, pug, Yorkie.

It would have been fine to leave it stupid and insecure but then you really had to add that last bad. You honestly think Shiva would treat your character which I assume is some walking god capable of destroying galaxies w/ every breath.

I know my writing isn't sophisticated and most the s*** I post seem random. But DO YOU REALLY THINK I WOULD KEEP SHIVA SOOOOOO ONE F****** DIMENSIONAL THAT SHE WOULD TRY THAT S*** ON YOUR CHARACTER. AND YOUR CHARACTER WOULD TEACH HER A LESSON AND THAT YOU HOPE NOT TO RUN INTO ME. THEN F*** IT I HOPE I DONT RUN INTO YOUR WHATEVER HERMIT THAT TURNS TO BE AN ACIENT DEITY YOUR CHARACTER IS.

REALLY YOU HAVE SO LITTLE RESPECT FOR MY WORK THAT YOU THINK I CANT ADAPT AND FOR YOU TO EVEN ADD THAT LAST BIT. IF THAT'S HOW YOU FELL F*** IT I WILL NOT PARTICIPATE AND YOU, FENNEKIN, AND WHOMEVER ELSE CAN HAVE FUN.

SO UNTIL YOU KNOW JUMP TO CONCLUSIONS THINKING THAT I HAVE NO F****** IDEA WHAT I AM DOING. JUST KNOW THERE IS A RYMHE AND REASON TO WHY I DO S***. I MAY NOT MAKE THE BEST AND MOST SOPHISTICATED CHARACTERS AROUND BUT DAMM IT WORKS FOR ME AND APPARENTLY MOST PEOPLE THAT ARE NOT SITTING ON THERE HIGH HORSE.

I remember you once said all the way back on UB 2 that to the arthour the characters are an extension of them. Well if I get senstve b/c believe it or some these RP characters represent a part of me. They are flawed people who seem to be irrational and act on emotion. But deep down they are good people who try there hardest and have a good heart. But if all you want to do is focus on the antics and not the actual character then f*** it. That's how you feel that's how you feel