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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 23, 2015 21:51:49 GMT -6
Grigori doesn't think anything of it. Remember, he was a slave who pretty much never got to grow up, like at all, because of what happened. Plus, another thing that GX knows about.
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Post by Neo on Aug 23, 2015 21:52:56 GMT -6
Please don't back me into a writing corner. There's a thin line, Golurk, and I can only have Orion remain silent as long as it's within character for him to do so.
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Post by Neo on Aug 23, 2015 21:54:21 GMT -6
Dangerous mission and all that? Orion's personality? You know, that kind of stuff?
You're really, really pushing it right now.
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Post by empireoffire on Aug 23, 2015 21:55:03 GMT -6
Here we go again.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 23, 2015 22:05:09 GMT -6
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 24, 2015 5:08:53 GMT -6
*checks back after morning shower*
What happened to the several other posts that were here?
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Post by Neo on Aug 24, 2015 5:28:15 GMT -6
*checks back after morning shower* What happened to the several other posts that were here? I deleted them, because I felt I overreacted. They were basically just me reminding you not to go too overboard, so I don't get backed into a writing corner. So just don't do anything really crazy where I'd absolutely have to have Orion react. I also apologized in case I upset you. Also, *Points to PM* |
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 24, 2015 5:29:24 GMT -6
*points back at PM* Bruh, your PM game is weak  |
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Post by Neo on Aug 24, 2015 18:43:26 GMT -6
So... I've been having a lot of difficulty writing Hypnos's intro. And I've finally come up with an idea. I've decided, against my better judgement, to try and get myself as upset as possible, as a form of twisted self inspiration, and try writing the post again, but with a darker, crueler tone.
Obviously, if this succeeds, I'll be extremely upset and teetering on the edge after this post. So, before I commit to this mildly insane and probably stupid idea, I need to make sure I'm not going to be ninja'd by GX and Lurk, with posts that could very possibly send me sprawling over the edge.
So. GX, are you going to post tonight? And if so, what is your next post going to be like? Golurk? What is your next post going to be like? It might help if you both just PMed me an estimated rough draft.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 24, 2015 18:46:09 GMT -6
What exactly is in it depends on what GX plans on posting. She's still really sick though.
Just play some Dark Souls and come back with fury. That or G rank Golden Rajang.
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Post by Neo on Aug 24, 2015 18:59:47 GMT -6
So, Golurk?
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Post by Neo on Aug 24, 2015 19:10:37 GMT -6
You know what... Couldn't we just go ahead and finish the scene tonight? There should only be a couple more posts, right?
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 24, 2015 19:11:15 GMT -6
Ninja'd.
Typing on a phone is slow. That'll probably be the second to last post from Grigori.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 24, 2015 19:11:45 GMT -6
Ninja'd again. I'm okay with finishing if Georgia's up for it  |
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Post by GX1997 on Aug 24, 2015 19:23:22 GMT -6
Let's do it.
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 24, 2015 19:36:00 GMT -6
I couldn't think of a good way to conclude the scene in that post.  Should we have Eden finish the conversation? |
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Post by GX1997 on Aug 24, 2015 19:38:34 GMT -6
I'm not sure what she could say to help him. Maybe now's the time for Orion to speak up with a wise observation? |
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Post by Neo on Aug 24, 2015 19:44:47 GMT -6
Lemme read the post first, then I'll see what I can do. |
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Post by Golurkcanfly on Aug 24, 2015 19:46:06 GMT -6
Maybe just leave him with an "I don't know."
It creates a bit more ambiguous progression that leaves a resolution hanging a bit, allowing for some more complex drama later while providing an understanding between Eden and Grigori before the Pergrande Arc which finalizes things further.
Though if you don't want to do that, Orion chiming could work as well.
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Post by Neo on Aug 24, 2015 19:48:02 GMT -6
I think I have something. Give me a couple minutes.
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