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Post by Deleted on May 1, 2016 14:09:09 GMT -6
POV: Bella Location: Unknown
Bella is asleep in her bed but is she very restless. Bella is having the same nightmare that has haunted her for a long time. The nightmare involves her, Mario, and Viki and they are facing off against a large shadowy creature. Bella is breathing heavily having used most if not all of her energy in the fight. Viki is unconscious having reached her limits and having taken too much damage. Mario is still hanging on but with trying to protect Bella and Viki and fight back against the shadow he is becoming overwhelmed. The shadow then smiles an ominous smile almost like its ready to end this.
"Mario I ready to see this to the end," Bella tells him. "I got you into this mess, and I refuse to leave your side until its over," Bella tells Mario as she stumbles to get back to her feet. Mario gives Bella a look of concern as she is barley able to stand and Viki is lieing on the floor not moving. "Don't worry everything is going to be...," Bella said as she stumbles to her knee.
Mario knows the battle is over and that the shadow has won. Mario then decides to make a faithful decison he looks over to Bella and tells her one thing. "Go," Mario tells her. Bella is unwilling to leave Mario's side and refuses to leave. Yet Mario knows if she dosen't leave then all three of them are doomed at least he can save Bella and Viki though. "Lets a go," Mario said as he picked up Viki and gave her to Bella.
Bella could only stand and watch as Mario runs towards the shadow. "Maaarrriiiooooo," Bella calls out as Mario jumps toward the shadow. As Mario and the shadow make contact a bright light emininates blinding and engulfing all. "Maaarrriiiooooo," Bella calls out as she engulfed in the light too.
To be countinued.......
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Post by Deleted on May 1, 2016 14:10:01 GMT -6
POV: Bella Location: Bella's Room
As soon as the light made contact with Bella she awoken from her sleep. "That drean again, it's been happening every single night," Bella said as she rose up in bed. Bella looked across the room to see Viki sound asleep. "Don't want to wake her, maybe some fresh air will help," Bella said as she threw on her robe and went outside to her balcony. "Aww it sure feels nice out here and the moon is nice and full," Bella said as she soaked in the moons ray.
"Lady Bella are you awake," an elderly males voice call out.
"Yeah, couldn't sleep again Bob," Bella called out to her butler Bob.
In walks in a distinguished gentleman appears to be in his mid 50s. Bob is dressed in what one would call a typical butler uniform, with a black coat, and white undershirt, black dress pants, and black dress shoes, the only other distinguishing feature is his grey mustache and grey beard. "Was it that nightmare again, my lady?" Bob asked.
"Yeah it was the very same nightmare I been having ever since the incident," Bella told Bob.
"It wasn't your fault Lady Bella," Bob told Bella. "You can't keep blaming yourself for what happened to Mario," Bob said as he made his way to Bella. "You know the type of person Mario is he's always ready to help anyone in need," Bob said to Bella hopefully to comfort her.
"That's why I am exactly to blame, I should have known better," Bella said. "I should have been strong enough to handle this myself," Bella said. "Yet, because of my weakness, not only did I endanger the life of my friend Viki, Mario was....," Bella said as she pounded the railing on the balcony.
"Lady Bella if you don't mind me saying," Bob said to Bella. "You need to snap out of it," Bob told her. "You did what anybody else would do in your situation," Nob said. "You went to a friend for help," Bob said. "You told Mario of your situation and without a second thought he rushed to your side," Bob reassured Bella. "It's not your fault, his, or Vikis, if anything the blame belongs to him," Bob said.
"Your right if it wasn't for him," Bella said. "Yet how do I make the nightmares go away?" Bella asked.
"By not blaming yourself my lady," Bob said to Bella.
"Your right of course," Bella said to Bob. "Thank you Bob you been a big help as always," Bella said as she stretched and went back to bed.
"No Bella your wrong, I can be wrong," Bob said. "Yet, looking after you and seeing you smile is what makes every mistake worth it," Bob said staring at the moon. "Good night my sweet princess, may you finally ennoy a good nights sleep," Bob said as he closed the door to Bella's room.
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Post by Deleted on May 2, 2016 20:33:53 GMT -6
POV:???? Location: Unknown
In the middle of the ocean off the coast of DK island there lies something weird. What appears to be a couple of penguins wearing viking helmets and an unconscious large walrus on top of some driftwood. The penguins are rowing the driftwood with there fallen leader towards some type of land. They also are squabbling amongst one another arguing directions or something. They pay no attention as a pirate ship pulls next to them. The penguins are scared unsure what to do with there fallen leader in no shape to do anything.
Yet what happens next confuses them, as ropes are thrown from the ship by what look like bipedal crocodiles. There leader who is off to the side orders the crew to bring them on board as the crocodiles go to fetch the two penguins and the large walrus. They are brought on board walrus and placed him in one of the rooms. There he lies asleep for what appears to be weeks. Until one day he awakens from his slumber.
"He ya awake finally," the crocodile asked. The Walrus just looks around wondering where he is. "Good ta captn be seing ya, Fredrick" the crocodile says as he leaves the room. Lord Frederick is courouis how they possibly could know his bame. During his brief occupation of DK island he nevered encountered any such creatures. The only way Lord Frederick would get any answers is by seeing the leader. So he gathered his lone belonging a Viking helmet and made his way to the top deck.
When Lord Frederick was on top of the deck he saw more of these strange Crocodile creatures some of which were wearing leather jackets, some were wearing bandanas and pirate earings, and some even had some peg legs. Some of the bigger crocodiles were order the smaller creatures around while they were weilding what appears to be clubs or canons. Lord Frederick noticed some of his minions aboard including the penguins that were with him, a couple of polar bears wearing viking helments, some walruses, seals, and owls. They all saluted there leader as he walked by and then returned to there tasks. Lord Frederick appeared all right woth his minions working with the crocodiles because they were eaquls. Lord Frederick then appeared in front of the captins room which was guarded by a rather muscular crocodile holding a rather large club. Normally, Klubba (at least that what it says on his club) wouldn't alloe anyone near the Kaptins office but he was told about Frederick and allowed him to enter.
"Welcome, welcome I trust my Kremlins treated you with the utmost respect," The Kaptin asked.
Lord Frederick just glared in his direction.
"Come now no need to be all silent and guarded, now" the Captin said.
"What you want?" Lord Frederick asked. "If you want to talk with me, at least have the decency to face me," Lord Frederick said.
"Really does is bother you that much," The Captin said. "Okay allow me to properly introduce myself then," the Kaptin said as he turned his chair around to face Lord Frederick. What Lord Frederick saw appeared to be a rather large crcodile wearing a pirates hat, a pirates jacket. Yet the one thing that stuck out literally was K. Rools one eye seemed to bulge. "Lord Frederick allow me to properly introduce myself, I am Kaptin K. Rool leader of this band of Kremlins," K. Rool said to him.
"Hmm captin you said, so again what do you need me for?" Frederick asked.
"It's not so much what I need for you or what I can do for you," K. Roll said. "I take it you had an encounter with him," K. Rool said to Frederick. Lord Frederick faced twitched a little bit as he remembered his encounter with DK. "Let me huess you were so close to complete and utter control just for DK to beat it outta ya," K. Rool said to Federick.
"So you did all this taunt me," Frederick said as he slammed his fist against K. Rools desk.
"At ease my good friend, I know better then anyone your pain," K. Rool told Frederick. "I had many encounters with those flea ridden monkeys," K. Rool said. "I even had my hands on DK locked up until his flea ridden cousin and his girlfriend interfered," K. Rool said. "So what can you do, its what we can do," K. Rool said.
"You mean a partnership," Frederick said to K. Rool.
"Of course a partnership to once and for all to take down DK and his family once and for all," K. Rool said.
Lord Frederick looks like he's thinking about the offer for a bit. "So a partnership to end DK once and for all," Frederick said as K. Rool held out his scaley hand. "To the end of DK," Lord Frederick said as he shock K. Rools hand. The two then broke out into a hearty laugh as they begun to plan for the destructive of DK Island and his family.
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Post by Deleted on May 3, 2016 15:37:28 GMT -6
POV:
(Enough X its about time you give the viewers what they want.)
Umm okay was going to take care of the two Annas first.
(Annas annas who gives a Fletching about Annas. I am the true star of not just the cyoa, but of Oz and the verse.)
The star of the verse, umm we already have a dragon as the star of the verse.
(Please its bad enough that you have me sleeping in Oz. Which I don't mind by the way just Sayan But people are being denied my greatness over there but really an entire chapter and not one mention of me. I mean it's time you give the people what they want Gwaaaa.)
Okay fine err ummmm well looks like there's been a slight change in plan.
(About time looks like its time for another installment of the real cyoa
Browser's Quest in the Search of Stuff)
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Post by Deleted on May 3, 2016 18:47:45 GMT -6
BGM: Bowser's Quest
"Gwa ha ha ha, bout dam time X," Bowser said to someone named X.
Location: Toad Town
Bowser having arrived in his sweet ride to Toad Town expected the usual response. The usual response would be Toad's running in pure unadulterated fear and just utter chaos but something is different today. The Toads are just going on about there business paying Bowser no mind. In fact some are just walking right by him like he's not even there.
"Something ain't right, here," Bowser said as he looked at a list (that I wrote of course) of things to do. "Let's see arrive in style, check," Bowser said. "Hmm arrive in the center of town, and announce presence with authority," Bowser said before letting loose some flames to the air. "Okay now complete and utter chaos," Bowser said looking around. The town was quiet and peaceful as always a butterfly landed on Bowsers head.
"Lord evilness is seems like some type of festival," Kammy said getting out of the car. "Hey look is that a cotton candy stand," Kammy said as she reached into her pocket and pulled out some coins. "Be right back sire," Kammy said as she went to the stand.
"Wait, wait sigh I really need some better minions," Bowser sighed.
While Bowser was bemoaning his lack of competent minions a youbg lady came bext to him. She appeared to be a fortune teller of some type almost like Merlen and his family. "Ahh do I see a creature great and green, needing an answer I suppose," the lady said to Bowser.
"Well I am green and great I suppose, anyway what ya want?" Bowser huffed towards her.
"If its answers you so seek, its all but a simple gaze into this ball it is," she told Bowser.
"Well I guess it can't hurt," Bowser sighed.
"Oh but before we begin the stars seek a small payment of course," she said to Bowser.
"Payment, payment do I look like a bank, but answers could be worth it," Bowser thought
So what should Bowser do?
A.) Bowser should pay for the fortune I mean she seems like one of those Merlin people and who knows maybe it will be worth it.
B.) Bowser should just ignore her please probably some type of scam and Bowser don't have no time for that.
C.) Bowser should find a way to get the fortune for free. I mean taking stuff from people is what I do.
D.) Bowser should attempt to tell her fortune somehow. What could go wrong????
E.) Custom option you are Bowser and who knows if you will ever get a chance to be such a great character again.
Something Something polls open something something vote.
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Post by SummerCrow on May 3, 2016 19:20:06 GMT -6
CD. Something-something lots of something in your future if you don't something my future Gwahaha
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Post by SpringForest on May 3, 2016 21:28:05 GMT -6
C AND D!?
You mean pay for the fortune by reading her a fortune!? GENIUS!
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Post by kjmccloud on May 4, 2016 9:44:51 GMT -6
Yes. That. Is perfection. CD.
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Post by Fen on May 4, 2016 15:45:37 GMT -6
I will go with C and D. This is a great CYOA.
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2016 8:20:39 GMT -6
I will go with C and D. This is a great CYOA. Thanks you Marcos it really means a lot to hear that.
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2016 8:22:53 GMT -6
Now C&D (to bad there was no M option too ) are locked in. Hmm will try to get it up today sometime probably maybe.
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Post by Deleted on May 7, 2016 16:18:11 GMT -6
Okay lets do this
"So you say you can tell my future?" Bowser said.
"Of course my fortunes can be very fortunate for you," the lady told Bowser.
"Okay then go ahead make with the future telling," Bowser told the young girl.
"Of course, fortunes I can tell but you must pay the price," the lady told Bowser
"Well Kammy has my coins with her right now, but I can pay you when she gets back," Bowser told her.
"Well if you promise to pay then, a fortunate is in your future," she told Bowser.
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Post by Deleted on May 7, 2016 18:07:34 GMT -6
"Mummbo Jummbo the stars are speaking to me," She said while gazing into the ball. "Hmm the vision is clearly becoming clear," she said as she stared into the crystal ball. "Ahh I see it now, an old friend is looking to reclaim something that belongs to you," She said. "A thing that is red and green and is ohhh no this isn't good," she countinues. "They find something Purple and not of this world and what becomes of it," she says as her vision returns to normal.
"I knew it Green stache and purple guy are trying to take over my castle," Bowser said.
"No its....," the young lady said
"Knew it Green stach can never be trusted," Bowser said.
"Anyways payment is what I seek or you shall be in for a very shocking experience," the young lady told Bowser.
"Oh well I got something better then coins, thats right your in luck because its time for Bowser fortune time thing," Bowser said as he pulled out a regular looking ball. "Hmm something something something, oh the Koopas, are speaking to me," Bowser said looking into the ball. "Just like a boo that is blue and awkward you shall not be getting, a single coin from me," Bowser said. "Gwa ha ha, thanks for the free freak show loser," Bowser told her.
"Ahh, so thats how it will be well this fortune is free, you are in for a very shocking experience," she told him. The young lady wazed her finger and a dark cloud appeared over Bowser. The cloud rumbled a bit and struck Bowser with a lightning bolt.
"Bzzzz, puff," Bowser said as he struck by a lighting bolt. "Umm that was certainly, shocking," Bowser said as he fainted.
"Mystic what are you doing here?" Merlin asked his granddaughter.
"Nothing Grandpa this place is a drag how can I get any proper training in this town," Mystic said to Merlen. "I mean fortune telling is in the blood but well staying here is like being stuck in mud," Mystic sighed.
"Well I might be able to help, I know a friend or two that might be able to help," Merlen said to Mystic. "Come dear this place smells like burnt turtles," Merlen said as him and Mystic went back to his place.
"Wow lord evilness, you'll love this festival," Kammy said floating next to an unconscious Bowser. "They have all sorts of games, and stands, even managed to won you a couple of things," Kammy said as she placed a Princess Peach plush and a Cheep-Cheep in a fish bowl inside Bowser's Car. "Sire, really whats that burning smell, and where is it coming from Kammy said. "Oh looks like Bowser had a really great time while I was away all covered in Black and passed out," Kammy said. "Actually, kinda of hurt Bowser would run off and have so much fun without me, well two can play this game," Kammy said taking off to enjoy the festival.
"Stupid green stache trying to take over my castle," Bowser mumbled.
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Post by SpringForest on May 8, 2016 16:04:07 GMT -6
So we found Luigi and the mystical Mystic. But more importantly what was this purple...?
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Post by Deleted on May 9, 2016 7:25:15 GMT -6
Okay so the next couple of scenes involve a little bit of a set up. For those of you not familiar with Season of Sorrow there should be a thread here with a link to previous entries.
Season of Sorrow is a great cyoa created by CDM (aka Happy Banana Fairy or the French way of saying it). (If you want to include a link Mr. Crow you can so people can check it out if they want to) Early in the cyoa there's an infamous seris of events when the RNG went out of its way to kill off a character (her name is Lane) despite everything the readers did right the RNG was determined to kill off Lane.
Now some people started blaming our very own Anna w/o getting her side of the story. Well these next few scenes will attempt to describe the scene from the Annas (Flanna and Anna?) POV.
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Post by Deleted on May 9, 2016 12:19:12 GMT -6
Location: Inside a Cabin on Cheep Cheep Blimp.
POV:Flanna
While everyone is either asleep or sight seeing on the outter deck of the blimp Rosalina and Flanna made there way to a room inside the blimp. Rosalina was anxious to learn more about the mysterious Flanna. When Rosalina and Flanna were sure that no one was around, Rosalina and Flanna began talking. "So may you ask you something Anna?" Rosalina asked Flanna.
"Umm okay, what would you like to ask me about?" Flanna said.
"Can you tell me about a young lady you encountered," Rosalina asked.
"Err umm young lady," Flanna asked nervously.
"You know who I am talking about," Rosalina told Flanna. "From what I can tell you seem like a good person... err umm bird but what happened with Lane," Rosalina asked. "What did she do to you that she just have to perish the way she did?" Rosalina asked.
"Well you see its complicated," Flanna said.
"I don't know having such a vendetta against one doesn't seem complicated," Rosalina told her. "I mean the fact is you show such cruelity and indifference that you would change her fate so many different times," Rosalina said. "Honestly, I am still a little concerned you might tried to do that to us," Rosalina said to Flanner in a concerned tone.
"I don't blame you miss Rosalina," Flanna told Rosalina. "I mean as a goddess it falls on me to prevent such things from happening," Flanna said. "Yet, how can I stop the very person I love, someone I looked up to," Flanna said. "You have to understand she's my sister and she means the world to me," Flanna said.
"So it's Ann's fault?" Rosalina asked Flanna.
"No my older sister she said she knew abput my special powers and she wanted to help me, in controlling my powers," Flanna said.
"Can you tell me what happened in your own words?" Rosalina asked.
"Sure or at least I can try," Flanna said as she began recounting the story of that fateful day.
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Post by Deleted on May 9, 2016 14:48:33 GMT -6
BGM : Anna? Theme
Location: Unknown POV: Anna?
Somewheres in an unknown chambers theres a girl. This girl might seem very familiar to everyone she is almost the same as everyones favorite merchant Anna. Upon intinal glance you would be right in assuming you are looking at Anna. Yet, upon closer inspection this person isn't Anna at all instead of the fiery red hair our beloved goddess is known for her hair is a sumber blue color. Also a birthmark on her neck that she usually covers with her hair so no one sees it. She appears to be alone deep in thought about something when an unwanted guest appears.
"So hows my favorite Anna doing?" A weird person asks. The person appears to be a normal jester like character with half of his face black and the other half white. He is wearing a purple and black jackets and he appears to be wearing a jester hat.
"What do you want Dimento?" Anna? grumbled towards him.
"Why I just wanted to see what's up?" Dimento said while taking a dramatic bow. "I mean he did say we were partners after all right," Dimento told Anna?
"If you say so even through I haven't seen that man ever since he gave me this wonderous invention," Anna? said while she was playing with her bracelet.
"Wow to insult the guy by calling him a man, but what can I expect from a wanna be Anna?" Dimento told Anna? in a very sarcastic tone. Anna? without lifting a brow tossed a dagger right towards Dimento. If it was anyone else that person would have a dagger right through the skull right now but Dimento has a special ability. "Sigh this again," Dimento said as he vanished. "Come now you should know by now those silly tricks wouldn't work on me," Dimento taunted her.
"One of these days it will," Anna? said very casually.
"Oh right like the plan to take the power of your goddess from your sister," Dimento said. "Pray tell how is that working out love," Dimento told her in a mocking matter.
"You know damm well what that bi.... Ggggeeeennggaaarrr," Anna? was interrupted by Chlortles who just arrived.
"Great what the hell do you want?" Anna? growled towards Chlortles.
"Gen gen gen, I am just the messsangar, hete to deliver a report," Chlortles said. "Lord Faful and Sir Midbus are currently, in the process of taking over Gengar Gengar Castle," Chlortles said. "That loser Crump on the other hand, well just say the word and I can Ggggggeeennngggaaarrr him," Chlortles said with a sick grin.
"At least some of my minions aren't completely useless," Anna? said rising from her seat.
"Oh something interesting too about what happened at Gengar Island," Chlortles said. Anna? looked at him with mild intrigue. "Apparently, a girl with wings and a girl that looks like you but with red hair defeated Crump and Lord Fawfuls invention Yoob," Chlortles said.
"Why didn't you say you hot rid of your annoying younger sister and her friend?" Dimento asked.
"So they both live and they been in that dimension all this time," Anna? said with a mock grin. "Well Mr. master of dimensions how about you make yourself useful and check up on those two," Anna? said to Dimento.
"It would be my pleasure and honor my lady," Dimento said right before he vanished.
"As for you Chlortles, tell Fawful keep up the good work and make sure he uses the secret weapon on those brats of Bowser he calls the Koopalings," Anna? told Chlortles who mocked saluted her and then vanished into the shadows.
"Finally, some time to myself to think," Anna? sighed. "As annoying as that jester is he's right I only managed to get a taste of her true power, but then she had to go and grow a conscious on me and seal away the rest of her power," Anna? sighed. "Yet if those two are alive then no doubt, she will seek them out and is probably traveling with them right now," Anna? said with much day. "Who knows maybe they can be useful after all, but we will see," Anna? mused.
"Anyways I wonder what they will think about her wheb they find out what I made her do to Lane," Anna? said as she kicked back in her chair and began reminiscing about that fateful day.
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Post by Deleted on May 14, 2016 17:49:26 GMT -6
Okay quick poll
As you know Bella and Viki are based off of two characters in the Mario universe. Bella was going to join around ch.5 while Viki was going to join in the Final ch. of act 1 (aka Ch.6). But I was thinking of having her join sooner. That's why I will just ask here.
So when do you want to have Bella Join?(PS you still wouldn't learn her true identity til Ch.6)
A.) As soon as you get back to Toad Town B.) After you get to Toad Town but before you go to Diamond City (setting for Ch.3) C.) After Ch.3 but before Ch.4 D.) After ch.4 but before ch.5 E.) Before Ch.5 F.) Ch.5 right before you leave Toad Town and go to the (spoiler) location
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Post by SummerCrow on May 14, 2016 18:32:43 GMT -6
I vote for whatever you originally had planned
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Post by SpringForest on May 14, 2016 19:23:18 GMT -6
Whichever one will go best with the story. I don't want to rush a new character and accidentally mess up the story somehow.
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