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Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2015 17:28:33 GMT -6
While I am here it is that time again.
It is time for the bump that plays another bump in disguise.
Info Bump
Today this bump will be a little different because well its not about one of my characters but well it involves someone from another cyoa.
To anyone not familiar with the CYOA Season of Sorrow it was a great CYOA that was created by CDM. Well in one of the most infamous moments of the cyoa one of the characters Lane was killed off despite have less then 1% chance of dieing, making all the right choices, and even using a revving item she was still killed of by the RNG.
Well in some of the end of chapter discussions Rosalina is going to ask about that and the RNG...... Anna will tell why it happened.
(Thanks to CDM for his permission)
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Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2015 17:30:37 GMT -6
Okay it's probably safe to assume the support conversations are locked in
CDM; BDF
Fennekin; ACF
Cloud ; ABF
So current count
A;2
B; 2
C; 1
D; 1
F; 3
So that part of the poll is still open.
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Post by SpringForest on Jun 14, 2015 12:51:09 GMT -6
BDF
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2015 16:12:26 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2015 22:24:50 GMT -6
Wow so didn't see Digi (which by the way I am pleasently surprised for and I am very grateful for) coming to provide the tiebreaker. So looks like B D and in a landslide victory F are looked in along with the support conversations.
Will go ahead and try to get everything posted within the next couple of days
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2015 15:22:39 GMT -6
Mushroom Kingdom Chronicles.xlsx (47.04 KB) So for the latest stats click on the link and if anybody can tell me how to link the actual spread sheet let me know. And like I mentioned before I am switching my style to AoD and SoS style where the numbers are more like indicators then actual stats. Max a tier 1 class can have is 20, tier 2 is 25, tier 1 special class 25, tier 2 special class 30 And also here are the current chapter breakdown is looking as voted by you guys. CH.2 Yoshi CH.3 Wario CH.4 Luigi Still a chance to make any changes if any of the voters want to make any changes
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Post by Deleted on Jun 17, 2015 16:32:04 GMT -6
So well it seems like it is going to be a long post but well here's an inventory update....
Current Inventory
Healing/ Reviving Items
Mushrooms (HP + 10); 14
Super Shrooms (HP +25)
1 up mushroom (revive, HP/2); 2
Moon (revive Full HP); 1
Stats Items
Draco shield (Def +2) 1
Class Changing Item
Second seal (allows for class changes for characters at lv.10 or above); 3
Master Seal (allows for a character lv.10 or above to go from tier 1 to tier 2 class) 2
Coins 3225
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Post by Deleted on Jun 20, 2015 11:01:45 GMT -6
Stats
Okay so finally figured out how too link my Google drive sheets to the cyoa. Best part is that it makes the. Changes its self. So sorry it's taking long for this latest update taking longer than expected to actually plan the scene out. Hopefully, I can get a rough draft done tonight so I have something to look at, edit and then post
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Post by Deleted on Jun 25, 2015 14:34:50 GMT -6
So good news. Despite having no power for the past couple of days I was still able to do a rough draft of the post so I should have the post up tonight. Boy was it a long post too
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Post by Deleted on Jun 25, 2015 22:31:33 GMT -6
Finally, got the post up to Ann x Sophie Support conversation done.
"Well might as well go see how May is doing?" Sophie said to Ann. Ann was too busy looking at a tiny notebook to even acknowledge Sophie. "Perfect time for my revenge," Sophie said as she took out her training Ax and took off towards Ann. Ann right before Sophie was able to hit Ann with the training Ax, Ann swatted the ax without taking her eyes off the notebook.
Sophie x Ann B
"Really but how?" Sophie said in amazement.
"Oh you were saying something, sorry I was going over some old records," Ann told Sophie.
" Old records," Sophie asked really confused as she went over to Ann.
"Well yes I keep a record of what I owe people and what people owe me," Ann said. "You know an important part of being an Anna is too keep records of all transitions you ever made," Ann said while glancing at Sophie. "Sometimes Sophie you have no idea how hard it is being me, trying to keep track of all these records," Ann sighed as she began reading names.
"Ann we're your friends you know that right not some random notes in a book," Sophie told Ann.
"My my sweet, innocent, naive, Sophie if only you knew how much these so called friends owed me take Rosalina for example," Ann said.
"Wait you were keeping records on how much Rosalina owed you?" Sophie gasped. You know the same Rosalina that saved your life after your sister stabbed you," Sophie said in disbelief. "After everything she did for us like gave a place to stay, valuable training, and so forth," Sophie continued. "Let me get this straight you're still going to keep record of what she owes you? Sophie asked in disbelief.
"Why of course, there's the time one of her Luma children stole my piece of cake?" Ann said. "One of the times her children took my favorite dress and tossed it in the fountain," Ann went on. "Oh the time that one of her launch stars caused the tiniest of tears in my skirt," Ann finished up.
"Your something else," Sophie facepalmed in disbelief. Ann was going to say another name until she saw it was Sophie's and tried her best to move on. "Hey what was the next name on your list," Sophie inquired.
"Umm nothing, nothing at all," Ann said trying to blow off the question.
"Hmm, let me see that," Sophie demanded. Ann tried to keep the notebook away from Sophie but was unable when Sophie flapped her wings and blew the book away. "Well what do we have here?" Sophie said glancing over Ann's notebook. Hey Ann, why is my name in this?" Sophie asked.
"No reason just a typo," Ann said playing off Sophie.
"Let's see what we have here," Sophie said as she hovered in the air glancing over the record Ann kept on her. "Wait really you been keeping notes from when we were 4, even as far back from when we first met," Sophie said flabbergasted. "Wait you still remember the day, we were playing with dolls, and one of them ripped," Sophie said. "Let's see here, oh the time I asked for a little bit of Gold just for a piece of candy," Sophie said very annoyed. "Oh this is just great the one day we had a sleepover you stepped on my wings by accident and you caused me to break a lamp because I flinched," Sophie sneered towards Ann.
"Well you look at that I think May's calling us?" Ann said taking off.
"That girl I wonder about her sometimes," Sophie sighed taking after Ann.
End of Support
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Post by Deleted on Jun 26, 2015 20:53:47 GMT -6
Pt.2
While Sophie was chasing after Ann had already reached a rather happy bunch of May and a couple of Lumas. "Sister, sister, May is so fun to play with," Ray (the red Luma) told Sophie and May.
" Yeah she is full of energy and we love when she chases us," Brit (the blue Luma said).
"Hey guys how's everything going?" May called out.
"We are doing just fine," Ann said.
"Unless you ever ask her for a favor," Sophie huffed.
"Well do you guys feel like hanging for a bit?" May asked innocently.
"Yeah, I think we deserved a little bit of free time, Ann and Sophie," said as the three ladies began chasing around Ray and Brit.
30 minutes later.......dood
Ray and Britt were fast asleep after chasing around May, Sophie, and Ann. "I never remember this much fun," May said gazing into the sky.
"Wait this Ms. Mowz person never let you play," the two girls asked in perfect unison. "Well yeah but in between all the training and well don't get me wrong she's a very nice person... umm mouse but well she's not known to have fun," May told the ladies.
"I can remember how it was for me and Ann when we first arrived and started training with Rosalina," Sophie said to May. "She's a very kind person but when it comes to training, well she is extremely fierce when it comes to training," Ann and Sophie said. "Remember that one time you snuck out to play with the lumas, " Sophie told Ann.
"Yeah she wasn't happy to say the least, uhh the special drill where she just unleashed spell after spell and I had to dodge," Ann sighed
"Hey Sophie I am so glad that you allowed me to come," May told Sophie. " Here I want you to have this," May said handing Sophie a beautiful artifact.
"That's a master seal but let me guess you found it in Bowser's treasure room?" Sophie said.
"Yup it was so pretty and shiny I just had to have it," May said. "Anyways I am off," May said skipping away.
"She's certainly different," Ann said.
"Yeah she will fit in just fine with our ragtag group," Sophie told Ann as they chuckled at that statement.
Obtained a Master Seal
May x Zack C
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"Sigh, I wonder if I am ever going to get home to see you again," Zack wondered gazing into the stars.
"Hey Zack kun how's everything going?" May asked. "Fine," Zack said just kinda of told May.
"Well I am soooo happy to see you to," May said squeezing Zack. Zack sighed but also smirked a little bit at the attention.
"So what you doing?" May asked innocently.
"Nothing just thinking about everything from my past," Zack said as he drifted off. "Truth be told I didn't grow up in the Mushroom Kingdom, but a different universe altogether," Zack said to May.
"Oh so you're not from around here either," May said taking a seat next to Zack. "
"Wait either so .... Okay now I see," Zack said.
"Wait see what?" May asked looking around for something.
"Just like me Sophie, and Ann you came from a different universe altogether," Zack said to May.
"Well now that you mention it I remember this really beautiful tree, a nice dragon lady, and all these people paying tribute to her," May said.
"Beautiful tree, Dragon lady, wait that's in Valm, and that lady is Tiki," Zack said as a realization washed over him. "Oh I remember this shy little boy, with his parents and he had this beautiful raven colored hair kinda of like yours," May said deep in thought. " I remember how cute he was and telling this adult one day me and him are going to travel the world and go on many journeys, and.....," May was in the middle of talking when a Luma was trying to get May's attention.
"Sister May come play with us," Randy said.
"Well Zack kun it's been fun maybe we can chat again sometime," May said skipping off.
"Tiki, the beautiful tree, hair like mine, shy, just who is she," Zack wondered as he returned to gazing towards the stars.
End of support
"I can't wait to meet her, oh how does my hair look, is it frizzy, are clothes all wrinkled, how bout my face any spots or blemishes?" Ann asked Sophie very frantically.
"Your fine geez I never seen you this frazzled before," Sophie sighed. "Well its not every day that you get a chance to meet a princess," Ann told Sophie.
"It's not everyday that you're the younger sister of a goddess," Sophie snapped back.
" Yeah yeah whatever, haters are going to hate," Ann said very dismissively.
"How in the world are me and you best friends?" Sophie sighed.
"Oh man," Ann moaned as she saw Rosalina and Peach talking.
"Oh looks like the two of them are talking," Sophie said as her and Ann begqn listening in on the conversation.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 27, 2015 17:02:12 GMT -6
Peach x Rosalina C
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"Wow place still looks just as beautiful as it always does," Peach commented. "It's always so peaceful and pleasant being around here," Peach said strolling through the observatory.
"Well I for one am glad to see you safe," Rosalina told Peach. Especially, with alot of strange events going on lately, " Rosalina told Peach.
"Come now dear it's not like it was the first time, Bowser kidnapped me," Peach said to Rosalina. "Besides you know I am never in any danger with Bowser, I think he's just lonely at this point," Peach pointed out. "But still Mario not showing up has me worried," Peach sighed.
"Don't worry I am sure he's okay we can start looking around for him tomorrow," Rosalina assured her. "Anyways how's everything else been?" Rosalina asked Peach.
"Same old stuff just a different day," Peach sighed. "Throwing parties, go karting, getting kidnapped by Bowser," Peach said. "Other than that well nothing really," Peach said while shrugging her shoulder.
"You know I appreciate every time we get a chance to talk like this," Rosalina told Peach. "I have things to do but if you ever need anyone to talk to I am always available mo... Peach," Rosalina told Peach.
"Okay then we can chat some more other time," Peach said as Rosalina left the area. I wonder who mo is," Peach wondered out loud
End of support
As Rosalina was leaving Sophie and Ann approached Princess Peach. "Hello princess glad to see your doing well," Sophie said.
"OMG OMG its a princess I am so honored to meet you," Ann said in awe of Peach.
"Oh Sophie and Ann it's nice to see you two also," Peach said to both Ann and Sophie. "To think those two teen girls that I would see with Rosalina would grow up to be so strong and pretty," Peach said to both of them.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 1, 2015 19:32:59 GMT -6
Hey guys just had to make sure my eyes weren't playing tricks on me when it said over 3400 views. You don't know how much that means to me that so many people viewed my cyoa and how honored I feel.
As you guys know from the disscussion thread I recently started a new job with the Citys Water plant this week. For a while it will be a lot of morning shifts. Now before you think this is me closing or discontinuing the cyoa. Let me assure you I plan on seeing this to the end.
Now the support conversations for Peach x Sophie, and Zack x Rosalina are done just need to be proofread. Also have the post done up into the next choice right before the official introduction to Ch. 2.
Again wanted to assure everyone I plan on staying with this cyoa and if anything I am just in the middle of getting use to a brand new job that I hope turns into a career
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Post by kjmccloud on Jul 2, 2015 12:23:06 GMT -6
Man, you're an inspiration to writers everywhere! Good luck with your new job, man.
That settles it. If you can juggle this with work, so can I. I'll have an update out in three days from now!
...maybe.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 2, 2015 19:49:54 GMT -6
Views? How are you able to see views?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 2, 2015 19:52:41 GMT -6
Views? How are you able to see views?
On Desktop, when on a board, it says creator, Replies,view,a nd last post b, beside a topic.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 2, 2015 20:00:28 GMT -6
Views? How are you able to see views?
On Desktop, when on a board, it says creator, Replies,view,a nd last post b, beside a topic.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 5, 2015 9:01:45 GMT -6
Well we are coming to the final stretch.
"Wow what an honor, to be complemented by a princess," Ann said.
"Princess allow me to apologize for my friends behavior," Sophie said to Peach.
"Oh don't worry it's actually really refreshing to be around somebody who's so full of energy," Peach assured Sophie.
"See told you," Ann said sticking her tongue at Sophie who just glared at Ann.
"Anyways what do you plan on doing when we get back?" Sophie asked.
"I plan on travelling with you guys," Peach stated.
"Unacceptable, where's mama Rosalina at I have to stop this right away?" Ann said storming away.
"Um Ann," Sophie tried calling out to Ann.
"It's okay sweetie Rosalina already knows me and her talked about it last night, and she's fine with it," Peach told Sophie
Peach x Sophie C
"Okay but are you fine traveling with us," Sophie asked. "I mean we will probably be going to dangerous places," Sophie said. "Besides there's the fact that you have a kingdom to run and....," Sophie said as Peach stopped her.
"Sophie dear its fine, let's just say I had my fair share of adventures before," Peach said. "Well before you and Ann came to our world I travelled with Mario and believe it or not Bowser too," Peach told a surprised Sophie.
"Really you traveled with Bowser and Mario, how did that happen?" Sophie asked confused. "Oh interesting circumstances, but you would be shocked to see how soft hearted he is," Peach chuckled a bit.
"Really that loudmouth brute it actually, sweet," Sophie said as Peach nodded her head yes.
"Anyways I seen you in action today and you have some real talent as a fighter and as a leader," Peach said complementing a blushing Sophie.
"It was really nothing," Sophie choked out.
"Nonsense I seen how you handled new recruits, how you were able to lead everyone in the battle against Bowser, and how you handled your own giant," Peach told Sophie.
"So I know with such a great leader I have guiding and protecting us I know I am good hands," Peach said patting Sophie on the shoulder.
"Peach would you mind telling me more stories of your adventures," Sophie asked.
"Of course I look forward to it," Peach said.
End of Support
"Oh Sophie before you leave take this if you're going to be protecting me you're going to need the proper equipment," Peach said handing Sophie a pouch.
"Are you sure it's okay to take this? Sophie said opening the pouch and seeing it contained a lot of coins.
"It sure is if I am going to be traveling with you need all the money you can get," see ya Sophie, Peach said as she began to leave the area.
Obtained 2500 coins
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Post by Deleted on Jul 7, 2015 7:59:55 GMT -6
My canon pairings:
Sophie x Peach
Zack x Ann
May x Rosalina
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Post by Deleted on Jul 9, 2015 15:08:15 GMT -6
Well after what seemed like an eternity we finally, reached the end of this section.......
While Sophie was counting the coins she had, Ann was looking for Rosalina she saw her approaching Zack. Hmm this could be interesting, Ann said creeping close enough to listen to the conversation.
Zack x Rosalina C
"Wow you seem awfully lucky with these fine ladies," Rosalina said to Zack in a joking matter.
"Oh hey Rosalina sorry I just had a lot on my mind," Zack said to her. "Don't worry I too have a lot on my mind about you too," Rosalina said to Zack.
"Like what," Zack asked a little surprised by the response.
"Just how brave or stupid you really are, Rosalina said to Zack in a stern tone. " I appreciate your intentions and thought behind charging into Bowser's castle and trying to save Peach by yourself," Rosalina said to Zack," "Having said that it's awfully reckless for someone to willingly charge head first right into an enemy castle," Rosalina scolded Zack.
"Hey I just answered an ad in return for some great reward," Zack said nonchalantly. " Besides if you were so concerned why didn't you try and save her, or this legendary Mario I keep hearing about who couldn't be bothered to even show up," Zack responded a little defensively.
Rosalina in response raised her hand and a tiny jolt of electricity struck the surprised Zack. "What the hell was that for?" Zack demanded.
"Hmph, you have a lot to learn young one, you may be gifted but there is still so much for to learn," Rosalina told Zack. "Your lucky my sisters Ann and Sophie were there to save you, after the encounter with a Sledge hammer bros," Rosalina told Zack while she glared at him. "When Sophie, asked how long you would stay, I remember you saying that only till Starlow would grant you that wish you wanted," Rosalina told Zack.
"Well what's it to you?" Zack asked.
"Hmph you have a lot to learn starting tomorrow you are jn for a serious lesson in training, manners, and attitude," Rosalina told Zack. "Until I feel like you have matured then Starlow is forbidden from granting your wish," Rosalina said to the disappointed Zack.
"But but," Zack stammered out in frustration and shock.
"No buts, your training starts tomorrow and I hope you get plenty of rest," Rosalina said as she began leaving Zack. Zack could just stare there with a look of disbelief on his face and just sighed and mumbled something about what he did to end up with all these crazy ladies.
End of support.
Ann giggling at what happened with Zack made her way back to Sophie. "Now he knows what we had to go through, when we first arrived," Ann chuckled as she made her way to Sophie. "Hey Sophie you'll never believe what happened," Ann told Sophie. "Mama, Rosalina just basically, put Zack in his place," Ann laughed out as the two girls began laughing about what happened.
While Ann and Sophie made there way to DK, Starlow approached Rosalina almost like she wanted to thank her. "Thank you Rosalina, in truth his wish would require a star spirit that's older," Starlow told Rosalina.
"Now, now, dear it was nothing, besides he could use the time around here, it would be good for him," Rosalina replied to Starlow. "Now then, lets talk about you and my son Prince Luma," Rosalina told to Starlow. "Don't think I haven't seen you two getting awfully friendly with one another," Rosalina said to a now blushing Starlow.
"It's not like that at all, it's just.....," Starlow's voice began to fade as her and Rosalina began walking further and from Sophie.
Location; Top of the Observatory
"Anyways lets go talk to DK," Sophie suggested as they made their way to the roof. "Funny he's been with us since the beginning and we know little about him," Ann pointed out. "Yeah you're right he's been awfully, quite this entire journey," Sophie added. As the two ladies were talking amongst themselves, DK was reclining under a tree eating a banana.
"Hey DK how's everything going," Ann asked. "(It's all good just chilling and kicking back)" DK responded.
"Umm do you know what he said?" Sophie asked Ann confused.
"Not really I don't speak grunt," Ann responded.
"(Sigh, I forget that only people from my country can understand me)," DK facepalmed. Ann and Sophie were quick to comfort DK.
"Sorry we can't understand you but hey, can you write?" Sophie asked as DK nodded his head yes. "Hmm maybe you can write down what you want to tell us?" Sophie suggested as DK agreed. "Luckily, I have a notebook right over here, and well here you go," Sophie said tossing Ann's notebook towards DK, as Ann let out a huff.
"Luckily I carry a backup notebook," Ann added as she pulled out another notebook.
Sophie took some time to get over the shock from what Ann did and proceeded to talk to DK. "So DK where you from?" Sophie asked.
"(I am from a tropical island in a different country, its a chill place well besides the occasional Kremling or Tiki invasion but ehh its cool)," DK wrote down.
"Wow a tropical island that sounds so tropical," Ann said. "So do you have any family?" Ann asked.
"(Yeah a nephew named Diddy, my grandad Cranky, his wife Granny, my girlfriend Candy, best bro Funky, oh and my nephew's girlfriend Dixie, just to name a few)," DK wrote.
"Wow and they all have Kong at the end of their names sounds confusing," Ann commented.
"Do you miss them?" Sophie asked.
"(Sometimes I grow a little homesick but with my friend Mario missing and Ms Rosalina needing the help I jumped at the opportunity)," DK wrote.
"Anyways, so how long do you plan on staying?" Ann asked.
"(I plan on staying for the long haul, anyways its really nice you guys came to talk to me)," DK wrote down. "(I have a little gift for Sophie over here)," DK said handing Sophie what looked like a bunch of bananas.
"Um thanks," Sophie said confused at what DK handed her. DK showed Sophie that it was actually a hand ax in the shape of Bananas, it actually seemed slightly stronger than a normal hand ax but a little heavier. Wow what a cool weapon thank you DK, Sophie said. DK made a motion like that it was no big deal and that it was okay.
Obtained Banana Hand Ax
"Okay everyone gather around we are about to head to toad town to gather supplies and clues about Mario's whereabouts," Rosalina called out. After hearing Rosalina's message everyone gathered around the launch star as Rosalina activated the launch star and everyone made their way to Toad Town.
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