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Post by Neo on Oct 26, 2014 10:49:27 GMT -6
So Os, do I need to make any edits to my character? Or is that acceptable?
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2014 11:13:58 GMT -6
So Os, do I need to make any edits to my character? Or is that acceptable? This.
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Post by Osranger on Oct 26, 2014 11:28:32 GMT -6
Occupation: Assassin Personality Traits: Cunning Motivations: impress others with his wealth (I extended it a bit. It's a natural progression.) Skill set: Thieving or knife fighter. Take a pick at which one you excel at more than the other. Assassin covers everything else. Physical Trait: Short of stature.
Other: Distant from others. Find Julia
Physique: 3 Acumen: 4 Charisma: 2
Resources: 3 Spirit: 3 Influence: 2
Health: 6 Willpower: 7 Reputation: 4
Spirit: 3
If you are disappointed in your stats, don't be. Your blade lengthening trick, which was converted to invisible blade trick, is quite powerful. Also, poor people with no influence kind of get low stats in the resource and influence department. The only reason your resources are at 3, is because he has probably amassed a bit of wealth already as an hit man/assassin. Maybe one or two jobs. (Hit man atm, because as a novice, he probably isn't getting hired for high level targets.
Abilities; Power of air. Able to fly using wind to propel himself in the air. Can use air to also "extend" the length of his daggers by using the air to create an invisible sword.
Can also create gusts of tornadoes.
Fire: 2 Air: 3 Flight: 3 Fading: 3 Water: 2 Earth: 2
You have a choice to increase any of the following, Air, Flight, or Fade, by 1 and subtracting a point from another one, and you can add mimicry 2 if you subtract 1 from either one.
That will cover the range of powers you want. Air covers all manipulation of air, flight, and fading will be able to make you and your daggers invisible, (though personal invisibility will not extend to things that leave your person by more than ten feet or so. Also, personal invisibility is virtually impossible to keep up in combat. The more quickly or frantically you move, the harder it is for light to ignore you, and you come more into view. Your daggers are fine, because they are small, and have a much easier time fading.
Stunt: Air, increased velocity. (Wind you make is more powerful, and increases range.)
Tools: Serrated daggers. They are around the size of regular daggers, but are lengthened to be like short swords. Their hilts are a deep green, and the blades have been forged by a great blacksmith, using the strongest of metals the world has currently. [/quote]
Anything else. Vials of acid? Sleeping darts? A mask? Rope?
If you wish to haggle over anything in character creation with me, go right ahead. I'll haggle.
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Post by Osranger on Oct 26, 2014 11:37:45 GMT -6
So Os, do I need to make any edits to my character? Or is that acceptable? I'll go over it like I did with Fenris. Character creation will be a bit of a haggling process. First thing I should mention is that in your occupation, you put Fey instead of Ley, but more importantly, I kind of forgot to mention that the moon kind of exploded. It's now just a bunch of shards of rock floating in the sky. Some of it has probably fallen to earth, and I know that moon rock is normally not very special, but in this case, it would probably be the strongest substance in the world, next to the gold that makes up the Sun God's throne. If you have living armor, it would be made out of that stuff. Can you describe this Sage more while I review the rest of your character sheet?
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Post by Neo on Oct 26, 2014 11:57:14 GMT -6
So Os, do I need to make any edits to my character? Or is that acceptable? I'll go over it like I did with Fenris. Character creation will be a bit of a haggling process. First thing I should mention is that in your occupation, you put Fey instead of Ley, but more importantly, I kind of forgot to mention that the moon kind of exploded. It's now just a bunch of shards of rock floating in the sky. Some of it has probably fallen to earth, and I know that moon rock is normally not very special, but in this case, it would probably be the strongest substance in the world, next to the gold that makes up the Sun God's throne. If you have living armor, it would be made out of that stuff. Can you describe this Sage more while I review the rest of your character sheet? Made the necessary edits. The armor isn't actually living, it just appears so. But it is made out of Moon Rock now. I don't know what you have planned for the Ley, so I made the Sage intentionally vague. However, in my mind, he was one of the original Ley, the first Ley ever created, and one of the most powerful Ley. I view him as a mythical figure, kinda like Merlinus. For a physical appearance, he was short and hunched in his old age, with frizzy white hair and stormy gray eyes. In his prime, he was a striking figure, and a master of the Elements. He was the only Ley to ever master every Element. That's just in my mind though. I'm open to change if anything conflicts with your ideas.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2014 12:14:21 GMT -6
No, I'm good Os, but I will add probably vials containing poison, items for disguising himself and such a bit later.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2014 12:15:24 GMT -6
Oops. He is better at knife fighting.
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Post by Osranger on Oct 26, 2014 13:01:06 GMT -6
I was going to ignore this mechanic, but I probably shouldn't.
All main characters have a destiny and a tragedy. A tragedy is a traumatic experience from the past that shapes the character into what they are in the present.
A destiny is what a character thinks their higher calling is. Something so big, no one could do it alone. It can be separate from a character's current motivations, or related to it, just something that a character believes they will accomplish.
Not everyone is aware of their tragedies and destinies are. Or leave them blank. Based on your responses, I'll have my own tragedies and destinies for them that fits the world and plot.
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Post by Neo on Oct 26, 2014 13:06:41 GMT -6
Well, Orochi's tragedy is likely his unknown past and lack of family, which combined with the Sage's death, fostered a deep loneliness and need to belong. Also, the general mistrust due to his appearance. His destiny is his dream to help reshape the world.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2014 13:10:14 GMT -6
Well, for Askeladd, tragedy would probably be growing up in a dysfunctional family, and learning how to steal to get what he wants.
Destiny? He believes that stealing and killing criminals will make him a hero to the people that criminals prey on. As such, he will do anything to improve his reputation and only accepts help to make people think he is charismatic enough to get people to do what he wants.
Also, I'm about to start editing tools, Os. I'll inform you when I'm done.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2014 13:14:59 GMT -6
Andddddd done.
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Post by Osranger on Oct 26, 2014 13:27:51 GMT -6
Occupation: Bodyguard (actually, her second bodyguard) Personality Trait: Loyal Motivations: unite the Ley (probably a destiny.) Skill Set: master tactician Physical Trait: massive size
Stats:
Physique: 6 Acumen: 5 Charisma: 3
Resources: 7 Spirit: 4 Influence: 6
Health: 13 Acumen: 9 Reputation: 9
Abilities:
Fire: 8 Lightning: 5 Weather: 5 Air: 2 Water: 2 Earth: 2
Stunts: Flame, multiple targets: when attacking with flames, can hit large areas at once.
Lightning, multiple targets: when attacking with lightning, can hit large groups of people at once.
Normally when attacking with fire and lightning, one must pick a target or entity, or hit everything in the vicinity indiscriminately. Allows one to hit multiple groups or individuals.
Note: lightning can be used to charge weapons or mechanical objects. Will cause 1 damage to self, and increase damage by 1-5+. Just letting you know.
Tools: Eternal Void, a giant scythe with a gleaming blade said to never rust or break. The shaft of the scythe is black metal and six feet long, with a worn leather handle, and the blade itself is three feet long and curved. Strips of white cloth are tied around the middle of the weapon, which flap eerily in the wind. Although, their primary use is to distract enemies in battle. He also carries a small short sword, and a hunting knife.
Eternal Void (scythe. +4 damage, striking) Short sword (+2 damage, striking) Hunting knife (+1 damage, striking, close, if thrown)
Any other tools? Mark of office? Firearm?
Also, you are one of Galisa's two bodyguards. Both of them are equally important to her. If Ochiro is her sword, then Fadrick is her shield.
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Post by Neo on Oct 26, 2014 14:15:49 GMT -6
Orochi has a pendant Galisa gave him.
Also... I have in his background, that he was her first bodyguard, so why would he be considered second? Unless I need to change some things. Also, you did say my character could be her primary bodyguard and consort.
I sure as heck hope you aren't thinking of a triangle/threesome, because Orochi would never stand for that, and he met her first. His loyalty would also be compromised because he is a firm believer in virtue, and matching one's ideals with their actions. He wouldn't serve a harlot.
Otherwise, looks good.
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Post by Osranger on Oct 26, 2014 15:03:07 GMT -6
Orochi has a pendant Galisa gave him. Also... I have in his background, that he was her first bodyguard, so why would he be considered second? Unless I need to change some things. Also, you did say my character could be her primary bodyguard and consort. I sure as heck hope you aren't thinking of a triangle/threesome, because Orochi would never stand for that, and he met her first. His loyalty would also be compromised because he is a firm believer in virtue, and matching one's ideals with their actions. He wouldn't serve a harlot. Otherwise, looks good. No, he didn't meet her first. I'll PM you about that. Fadrick is not Galisa's consort though, and never could be. He also does not share in Galisa's views, but protects and guards her from her enemies.
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Post by Neo on Oct 26, 2014 15:11:27 GMT -6
Orochi has a pendant Galisa gave him. Also... I have in his background, that he was her first bodyguard, so why would he be considered second? Unless I need to change some things. Also, you did say my character could be her primary bodyguard and consort. I sure as heck hope you aren't thinking of a triangle/threesome, because Orochi would never stand for that, and he met her first. His loyalty would also be compromised because he is a firm believer in virtue, and matching one's ideals with their actions. He wouldn't serve a harlot. Otherwise, looks good. No, he didn't meet her first. I'll PM you about that. Fadrick is not Galisa's consort though, and never could be. He also does not share in Galisa's views, but protects and guards her from her enemies. Oh okay. That's fine.
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Post by Osranger on Oct 27, 2014 23:07:06 GMT -6
Cyoa's up
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